Jenna asked her mom why there were no baby pictures of her in the family album.
“We adopted you when you were three. Your real mother didn’t want you.”
Until she turned thirteen she accepted Mom’s explanation. Then the dreams started. A tunnel. Benches.
“Stay here, Tracy,” said the black-haired lady.
But rough hands came out of the tunnel and carried her off.
Today as she rode her bike Jenna found the same tunnel.
On the bench a lady with black hair wiped tears from her eyes and stared at Jenna.
“Tracy?”
“I’m sorry, Mommy. I went away.”
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple 
Oh that was good full of suspense. I wonder what else the child can do if she can dream so vividly? Here's my humble offering :http://remakingme-atiyatownes.blogspot.com/2012/04/friday-flash-fiction-rural-route-27.html
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Good one, and the feel-good factor too. Nice work.http://castelsarrasin.wordpress.com/2012/04/13/a-place-to-die-for-friday-fictioneers-13-april-2012/
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This is very powerful. Excellent work.http://quillshiv.com/2012/04/12/flash-fiction-faction-from-agatha/
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A very creative take on the photo. Beautiful and poignant. Nice!–Janhttp://janmorrill.wordpress.com/2012/04/13/1571/
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Oh sweet little tale with a happy ending. I was wondering why the so called "adoptive" mother was so cruel in her answer. Well done.LauraHere is mine:http://fictionvictimtoo.blogspot.com
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What a haunting story. I hope the adoptive mother takes back the cruel answer she gave – or maybe the adoptive mother had the child kidnapped and wants the girl to think her real mom didn't want her? Good flash, Rochelle! Thanks for joining us and I hope you come back every week 🙂
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Great job. I loved this and am glad it ended happily. My story, "Shell Shocked" is here: http://www.banterwithbeth.blogspot.com/
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DarkElmo approves of the general turn of the stories this week, and yours is a great example. I'm glad you resolved the story for us – cleverly done in so few words.I'm over here: http://elmowrites.wordpress.com/2012/04/13/friday-fiction-the-tunnel/
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Wow, powerful stuff. And what a shocking realisation that must have been. Dreams bringing clarity. I like it. You use a punchy style here which really drives the story home. Very well done. Here's my story this week:http://andyfloodwritersblog.wordpress.com/2012/04/13/meet-me-there/
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A haunting look at the innocence of Jenna, coupled with the disturbingly-real twist of her being snatched away early in life.It also reminded me a little of Japanese horror, expecting Jenna's real mum to be a haunted spectre or something. That's just my darker imagination, I'm sure. :)Mine is this-a-way:http://garybaileywriting.wordpress.com/2012/04/13/134/
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Sweet story. Kinda sad too. Here's mine. http://jemcogdell.blogspot.com/2012/04/running.html
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WOW how poignant
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Wow. I loved this one. I can see the mom returning to the place she last saw her daughter. Loved the reunited ending.Mine: http://shirleymccann.blogspot.com/2012/04/nightmare.html
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Hi ROchelle: I don't know how I missed this. It reminds me of all the innocent children disappearing from their own beds. I don't know what happened in your story but happy how it ended. If you wish to catch up with my Friday Fictioneer stories, find me here: http://www.triplemoonstar.blogspot.com
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Going back in time, reading your stuff. How did I miss this? Inattentive reader. Sorry. Another good one, Rochelle.
Aloha,
Doug
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This was the beginning of FF for me, Doug. Hooked from the first story. Look what that led to! Thanks for the retro-read and comment.
shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Thanks for sending me off to your very first FF! It gave me a chill that went all the way down my arm!
So good.
Shalom and Lotsa love,
Dale
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Dear Dale,
Coming back here, you can see I didn’t respond to the comments. Shame on me. The whole thing’s a little wonky since I pulled it from the original blogspot page. On the other hand, not bad for a first attempt, eh? So happy you’ve become a part of the FFFamily.
Shalom and lotsa hugs,
Rochelle
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No shame at all. That was then 😉
And not bad at all!
So am I. I couldn’t imagine stopping at this point!
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