This week Pegman takes us to the Arlington National Cemetery in Washington DC, USA.
Your mission is to write up to 150 words inspired by the prompt. Feel free to use the location supplied above, our take your own tour of Washington D.C. via Google maps and find a view that inspires you.
You may write poetry, prose, essay, limerick, sonnet, or fiction of any flavor. Once your piece is polished, share it with others at the linkup below. Reading and commenting is part of the fun.
Thanks to Karen and Josh for facilitating this unique challenge. To join click the frog.
This week I revisited and fleshed out a story I posted in Friday Fictioneers four years ago.
Genre: Realistic Fiction
Word Count: 150
INSTINCT
Six years my senior, my gentle brother was my hero. He was the valedictorian of his graduating class. Awarded a scholarship to Harvard, he owned the future.
I had just turned twelve when his draft notice came. Vietnam consumed every newscast. Mom was inconsolable.
The day he left to go overseas I clung to him and sobbed. “I’ll never see you again.”
“Duty calls, Sis.” He pinched my cheek and kissed my nose. “I’ll be back. You’ll see.”
“Promise?”
“Promise.”
***
Tonight we celebrate his sixty-fifth birthday. His hands tremble as he cuts the cake. The knife falls from his fingers and tears stream down his stubbled cheeks.
“I cut off their ears and hung them from a chain on my belt loop.” He swallows a pill with a swig of beer. “Thirty-six kills. God, I miss it.”
My brother did come back from Vietnam but he never returned.
Many came back in body only. It was a nasty war. As if any are not. Good story.
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Dear Jan,
The wars get nastier and nastier. But that one was particularly awful I think. If the war wasn’t brutal enough, the way the vets were treated when they came home was despicable. Thanks m’luv.
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Such sadness, such sorrow, such killing. I seal my mouth on it.
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I know what you mean, Crispina. There are no words to say. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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So many people returned from that war (as from any) scarred by what they saw, and even worse, by what they did. If world leaders truly understood the human costs, it’s hard to understand how they could send their own people to such fates.
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Dear Joy,
Wouldn’t it be wonderful if they declared war and nobody came? Thank you for your affirming comments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It would be, I agree!
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AMEN! That is a perfect story for Arlington… can’t really find words, this is too too REAL for it. ❤ (HUGS)
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Dear Bear,
Your “non words” say it all. Thank you and thank you for the hugs. ❤
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
I remember this story well. And the additional 50 words makes it all the more powerful. Impossible to NOT be affected by war, I should think. Some way worse than others. An additional tragedy.
Shalom and Lotsa love,
Dale
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Dear Dale,
Some of these men were turned into monsters, killing machines. But how could anyone witness what they did and not be changed? My brother in law has only started opening up about it over the past 5 years or so. Thank you for the encouraging words.
Shalom and Lotsa hugs,
Rochelle
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Too true. Impossible not to be changed.
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Dear Rochelle,
That is such a powerful piece of writing and your last sentence so poignant. I can’t begin to imagine how anyone of sensitivity and a sense of humanity can ever get over war. A cousin of somebody I knew volunteered for Vietnam fresh from college. He never came home.
I’m watching an incredibly powerful drama at the moment on BBC1 called “World on Fire”, all about the start of World War II. Some of it takes place in Poland and some in Britain. It’s one of those series that my mind keeps returning to throughout the week following each episode. If they eventually show it on one of your US channels, I would highly recommend it, although some of its content is galling to say the least.
We must make sure to have another face-time session in the next few weeks, and certainly no later than November!
All best wishes,
Sarah
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Dear Sarah,
I imagine any documentary that sticks to the truth is bound to be somewhat galling. At any rate I’m glad you found my story to be powerful. I’ve two brothers in law suffering the effects of Agent Orange. It’s hard to see.
I agree. We don’t want too much time pass before we meet for another face time session. I believe October is the last month for Dale’s golf club job for the season.
Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Great to see you Rochelle!
Such a tragic story. The gentle brother is lost. Really underscores how senseless it all is.
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Dear Karen,
So many senseless things in this world, aren’t there? Thank you for reading and for your affirming comments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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What a poignant story, Rochelle. This must have been the reality for many who went to war.
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