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Genre: What’s so Funny?
Word Count: 100
CRASHING THE GATE
Every morning she raced him through the entrance as fast as her four legs would carry her. He huffed and puffed behind her, trying to keep up. Alas his best was never good enough.
She would wag her stubby tail in victory as if to say, “Ha! You’ll never win, chubby.”
He’d hang his head as the gate clanked shut behind them. Locked out again. He and his playmate clawed at the rusty hasp and whimpered.
Connie, the lady of the house opened the gate and kissed his cherry-red nose. “Honestly, Russell, I wish you’d just fix the doggone latch.”
Cute story Rochelle. Love the drawing too.
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Thank you, Sadje. I did the drawing for Russell a few years ago as a birthday card. Glad you enjoyed.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It’s brilliant! You’re welcome Rochelle
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A lovely tribute, Rochelle
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I’m not sure I’d call this a tribute, Neil. But it was fun to write. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A great story, with a little wry smile. I rather enjoyed it. And the painting is great to
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Chubby believes in participation, don’t want to give up on hope. Cute story Rochelle
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Dear Vatika,
It’s always entertaining to poke fun at a friend. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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lol, cute. It’s been a while since I’ve seen a Russel story. That looks like a white boxer. Our first boxer, Brady, was white, and, me being a trim runner, he still always won…
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Dear Trent,
Those Russell stories are good for the soul. I figure he’s way ahead of me with Shelley stories so it was high time. 😉 Liza Jane is a white boxer and what a sweetheart. She’s one of Russell and Connie’s dogs and I’ve had the pleasure of meeting her. She’s quite a lapful. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I’m sure you are right concerning the number of Shelly stories… Boxers are my favorite, so no surprises with me that Liza Jane is a sweetheart.
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Chuckles… a good one. Beautiful pup, too! Bet he keeps you on your toes. 🙂 ❤
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Dear Bear,
Glad to have afforded you some chuckles. 🙂 I wish Liza Jane was mine, but she belongs to Russell and Connie. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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My money is always on the dog. 😃
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As well it should be, Tannille. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I can’t wait to see Russell’s rebuttal 🙂
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Dear Linda,
His rebuttal is brilliant as always. 😉 (But don’t tell him I said so.)
Shalom,
Rochelle
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What a fun story of a dog and his gate. Lol.
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Dear Jan,
Noodging Russell is always fun. 😉
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Smart daily exercise 🙂
Fun story, Rochelle.
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Thank you, Anita.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
I do hope you have noodged Russell to come and visit this week 😉 This was a fun romp!
Shalom and lotsa fun love,
Dale
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Dear Dale,
As you can see, Russell did show up and gave back in spades. Gotta love it. 😀 Thanks for coming along for the romp.
Shalom and lotsa energetic hugs,
Rochelle
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Yes he did! So fun. 😊
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I huffed and puffed reading it! Delightful.
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Dear Keith,
So glad you enjoyed. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I know all about dogs getting their way. Fun story and artwork to match.
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Dear Nobbin,
I’ve no doubt you know all about the canine population. I love your inLInkz pic. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Delightful! Great portrait too.
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Thank you, Penny. 😀
Shalom
Rochelle
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Great story, Rochelle and the artwork is really good. It looks like you, Russell and the dog would be in for a wild time.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Dear Rowena,
Liza Jane has a great personality. Russell is a lot of fun in person, too. And so is Connie. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Very entertaining offering, Rochelle. I’m sure Russell and his loved ones will be pleased by it.
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Dear Lisa,
I love noodging Russell whenever I can. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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❤ Shalom
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Dear Michelle Angelo W(T)F,
I was so out confounded by your post it took two days to reply. I believe the politically correct term for “chubby” is husky. As for being red-nosed – I yam what I yam.
As with most chores around the house, I’m procrastinating on repairing the doggone latch in hopes the rust will eventually do its job and the dang thing will fall off its hinges.
Liza Jane and Grace Ellen are thrilled with their portraits, and I’m sure Buster would be flattered by your excellent rendering of his image as well.
Best wishes in your new career,
Crusty, the dog butler
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Dear Crusty,
I feel for Connie having to constantly let you back in. Perhaps a night or two sleeping in your truck would cure you of procrastination. (Wait for it). Perhaps there will be blizzard conditions in Tahiti and you’ll get that latch fixed.
I’m glad Liza Jane and Grace Ellen like their portraits. I certainly had fun painting them. Nu? No comments on the return address on the envelope? I’m disappointed.
It does seem I have a new career, doesn’t it. From wine glasses to fur and floppy ears. Perhaps someone will ask for a dog with a wine glass. One never knows. 😉
Shalom,
Michelle Angelo W(T)F
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Well, they have dogs playing poker (and I believe drinking beer), so why not sipping wine. A more sophisticated canine, of course.
Love that the portraits were shipped directly was Walla Walla Bing Bang instead of Belton Asylum for Mentally Unstable Mimes. I suggested that we pay for your services with DNR tags, but collecting 3,000 of them would’ve taken forever–especially since so many are missing from our furniture and pillows.
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fun read. too real to be true. 🙂
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Dear Plaridel,
The characters are real. 😉 Not so sure about the story. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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If only they could learn to open and close the door behind them, but perhaps that would not be a good thing. Lovely story.
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Dear James,
I raised three boys. I’m not sure they ever learn to close the door behind them. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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But then he’d miss out on the daily race! 🙂
This was fun!! Mine went a very different way, but then again, perhaps not exactly. …
Happy Purim and may Tyrants fall and people rise,
Na’ama
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Na’ama Y’karah,
He’d never want to miss the daily race. 😉 Little boys really don’t grow up. (But then some little girls don’t either.) Glad you enjoyed. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Yep, growing up is overrated. 🙂
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Hey Rochelle,
Lovely story, photo, and painting. Wonderfully done, all around.
Peace,
Bill
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Thank you all around, Bill. 😉 Sometimes one has to let go and just have fun.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Yes, indeed. Can’t have too much fun. 🙂
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A very cute story and a very cute dog! Love the “to the victor go the spoils” with the photo of the boxer asleep with the ball in his mouth. Also, love the painting, Rochelle. What fun!
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Dear Brenda,
The little caricature was actually a birthday card for Russell a few years back when Liza Jane was still a puppy. This seemed a good time to share. 😉 That dog does have a lot of personality and is in the right home. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Sweet story! There’s no point trying to outrace a dog 🙂 Love the illustration.
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Thank you, Ali. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Querida Rochelle,
Thanks for the humourous tale. It got a chuckle out of me.
The watercolor is endearing to all in it. Happy Purim …
Abrazos y Carino,
Isadora 😎
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Querida Isadora,
Thank you for the chuckles. Glad you enjoyed mi amiga.
Shalom y abrazos,
Rochelle
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What a fun way to begin this week’s line-up of stories. Great drawing too.
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Dear Margaret,
Some weeks ya just havta go for the laughs. Thank you. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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The genre gave me a clue who this one might be about! Sounds like Connie is long-suffering, or maybe she enjoys the peace and quiet while he’s locked out!
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Dear Jen,
Actually, Connie is as much of a hoot as Russell. They were certainly made for each other. 😉 Thank you. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Aw, such a heartwarming story that makes me want to boop a fuzzy animal on the nose right now. I have cats so it’s a bit harder but doable.
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Dear Anne,
Dear Anne,
I’ve booped a few kitties on the nose. Granola, my cali who passed a while back used to love to touch noses. I think she thought she was a puppy. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Chuckles! Lovely dog story. Russell is the icing! Great fun reading. Rochelle.
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Dear Neel,
Russell is always the icing and the cherry on top, isn’t he. Thank you for the chuckles. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Awwwww I love this one. Cute little doggies. Great descriptions of them, old and young. Fabulous
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Thank you, Laurie. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A fun story! I love your drawing as well!
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Thank you, Sascha. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A charming and cheerful story Rochelle, I love the light heartedness of it.
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Dear Francine,
A person does have to step out of the dark box from time to time. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS went back to the dark side this week.
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