17 November 2023

Published November 15, 2023 by rochellewisoff

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Genre: Fiction
Word Count: 100

DEFENSE MECHANISM

Elise hated it when her parents fought. Daddy would say the most horrible things to Mommy.

            Elise would hide. Shutting her eyes tight, she would make up stories in her head.  

            When she was seven, she would imagine herself in lead roles in her favorite TV shows like Bonanza or Dr. Kildare.

Elise grew up. Mom and Dad continued to shout at each other. Elise no longer felt the need to crawl under her bed. She became quite adept at hiding within the confines of her own mind.

Elise moved out.

Her parents passed away.

Today Elise is an author.

65 comments on “17 November 2023

  • How serendipitous – the week I return to FF, your MC is Elise – the same name of one of the MC in the novel I’ve just finished writing! Hopefully her final fate here is a good omen for my book too. I’m glad she was able to take her childhood experiences and turn them into something positive.

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    • Dear Iain,

      Elise is the main character of my upcoming novel. She’s near and dear to the heart of this author whose middle name is Elise. 😉
      Thank you and cheers to MC’s named Elise. 😀

      Shalom,

      Rochelle

      PS Happy to see you back. I’ve missed you.

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  • I wonder if any author had a “normal” childhood? Seems that creativity is often smelted in adversity. Name-calling and other forms of verbal assault are as harmful as any physical assault and the healing takes just as long, from what I’ve seen. If the MC is you, I’m sorry you had to go through the vicarious traumatization of it ❤

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    • Dear Lisa,

      I confess. Most of the time when I write about Elise (my middle name) she is me. 😉 I used that form of detachment on into my adult years when I didn’t feel I could deal with things. Then in my 50’s I started going off into my head with stories when times were good. My first “published” story was fan fiction. When I discovered I could tell a story that others would read, it changed my life forever.
      As for “normal” I was told that’s a setting on a washing machine. Thank you so much for your kind words. ❤

      Shalom,

      Rochelle

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  • It’s nice that Elise took her difficult life experience and turned it into a talent! Your story is so relatable…maybe parents yelling not always the catalyst for imagination to flourish but close enough!

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  • Rochelle, this was one of my favourites, despite it’s dark and traumatic nature. There’s a delicacy of character in it and psychological insights which really appeal. It is not psychologically healthy for anyone to create or retreat into a separate or imaginary world to cope. That someone becomes a creative of some sort as a result is good in a way and better than some of the alternatives but still a questionable path in my mind. I had similar experienced growing up with undiagnosed hydrocephalus and having a swag of quirky symptoms with made me different in ways we didn’t understand until my mid 20’s when I was finally diagnosed. I used to zone out and I still write poetry to express my difficult emotions instead of talking to someone. This is where you can get some difficult psychological territory where people think you’re fine but you’re not.
    ANyway, very well written and I’m sorry if there’s an auto-biographical element to it.
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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  • A difficult start in life will leave scars, no matter who we are. I guess the key to achieving a healthy adult life, and finding satisfaction and peace, is what one does to deal with those scars. Becoming an author is a very good strategy, I believe. Well told, Rochelle. Three cheers for ‘Ellise’.

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  • There is something in your piece, Rochelle, that each one of us can relate to …. whether it be the constant distress of arguing parents, the escape through our imaginations, our love of writing or staring into Dr. Kildare’s beautiful eyes …. there is a universal appeal in your marvelous story!

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  • Dear Rochelle,

    Sorry for missing this (as you know, I had good reason 😉 ) but I’m here now, trying to catch up on my favourite bloggers.

    Elise not only became an author, she battled so many demons successfully. Nicely told, my friend.

    Shalom and lotsa frictionless love,

    Dale

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