31 May 2024

Published May 29, 2024 by rochellewisoff

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Genre: Novel Excerpt
Word Count: 100

Tony, Elise’s husband, had never considered himself a candidate for therapy. He’d always believed all that psychobabble was hogwash and hooey. However, since he’d met Dr. Hank Rogers at the verteran’s support group meetings, his opinions had begun to change.

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Tony had great respect for Hank, a Vietnam veteran who’d lost both legs in battle. He was the recipient of two Purple Hearts, a Bronze Star, and a Distinguished Service Cross.

At their first meeting, trying not to stare at the therapist’s stumps, Tony focused on the medals in their shadow box. “You must have some stories to tell.”

“You bet, but we’re not here to discuss my service history, Chief. Surely you have a few medals of your own. Nightmares?”

“I see how it is.” Tony had bristled. “What’s this gonna cost me, Doc?”

“Nothing, save some emotional baggage.”

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36 comments on “31 May 2024

  • The trauma never ends, does it? Until war itself ends. Great slice of life, Rochelle.
    On another note, I tried ordering your book, Ebook version but the site wants to charge me an extra $8 for delivery. I thought it was electronic.

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    • Dear Joy,

      And we all long for the day when we’ll do war no more, don’t we? Thank you.

      As for the book, I’m wondering if you clicked the right tab on the site. I wouldn’t think there’d be a delivery charge for an ebook. Unless there’s a glitch, which is possible. At any rate there are other sites to preorder the ebook as well. Amazon, Nook, Kobo. and https://books2read.com/b/4N8YYN

      Hope that helps.

      Shalom,

      Rochelle

      PS I went to the OHP site as a customer and was asked for a delivery charge for the ebook. Strange. I’ll ask my publisher about that. Meanwhile, you might try one of the other sites. Thanks so much.

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  • Dear Rochelle,

    A most interesting interpretation of the photo this week. I love me some snippets of your oeuvre. I think it’s a wonderful thing that Tony, albeit reluctantly, has decided to embark on this ride for his well-being.

    Shalom and lotsa courageous love,

    Dale

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  • Glad Tony got the help he needed for his ‘medals’. I share a piece of his cynicism about therapy, but I think the right therapist at the rigth time can also be priceless.

    I’m off to see if the book’s available here too!

    Jen

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    • Dear Jen,

      Tony is seeking help under protest. 😉 There are some crackpot therapists out there, for sure. Fortunately there are some who are wonderful and caring. I was blessed with a couple of dandies. I’m alive and grateful. (I’ve also encountered a few not so dandy ones).

      Thank you re the book.

      Shalom,

      Rochelle

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  • I’m glad Tony has found someone he trusts for help. I also don’t often trust therapists, but I think a therapist who had been in the trenches would be invaluable. Great story! -Angela

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  • I can’t imagine the horrors people endure in war. Watching on a screen can never match living it. Therapy is probably a lot better than my grandfather’s method of excessive drinking and violent outbursts.

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    • Dear Nobbin,

      Back in your grandfather and my dad’s day it was called shell shock. I’m pretty sure my dad, a Purple Heart recipient, suffered from PTSD. He didn’t drink but we all suffered his violent outbursts. I don’t remember anyone ever connecting the dots.

      Thank you for reading and commenting.

      Shalom,

      Rochelle

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  • I like the way you’ve made these two characters interact. Your 100 words bring them to life. Tony’s bristling and suspicious but I believe he’s come to the right therapist. Great use of the prompt too. Legs!

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    • Dear Laurie,

      I’m glad you connected all the dots between my story and the prompt. 😉 Of course the answers are in the book which is being released as I type. 😀 Thank you for your generous comment.

      Shalom,

      Rochelle

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