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Genre: Realistic Fiction
Word Count: 100
COLLATERAL ORANGE DAMAGE
“Farewell, Rob.” I laid my battered dog tags on his grave.
Prostate cancer took him. Doctors say I’m next.
Please try to understand. We were soldiers following orders.
“A little defoliating agent to clear the jungle and expose the enemy.” Our commanding officers assured us. “Nothing that will harm a human.”
I had to go back and see for myself.
Last night I visited a children’s hospital in Ho Chi Minh City where the fruits of our labors languish with twisted or missing limbs and eyes that bulge from enlarged skulls.
We have exposed the enemy, and he is us.
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WARNING! This is disturbing, watch at your own risk.
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple 
Such thought-provoking story. And this line, ” We have exposed the enemy and he is us,” is so powerful that it resonates the truth. 😦
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Dear Maria,
As I was researching for this piece, you could say in archaic terms that my gorge rose.
Thank you for your kind and affirming words.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It’s really a heartbreaking thing to think what war has done to the nature and to its people. 😦 It’s a great realistic story, Rochelle.
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It’s hard to ‘like’ a story like this. Far more serious than my ‘stealing sand’ tale, and it shows the, sometimes unwitting, lengths we go to, to ruin our beautiful world. 😦
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Dear Archon,
I have to wonder if anyone, including our government had any idea of the far reaching effects of Agent Orange. I’ve two brothers in law who are suffering because of their exposure. I had no idea to what extent…well there are no words.
Thank you for commenting.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I think that is the possibly the most powerful 100 word story I’ve read of yours, Rochelle. That last line is so dramatic, and the link so harrowing. Very well done, for reminding us once again, in your inimitable way, of man’s inhumanity to man. And thanks for the massive “heads-up”. I appreciate it. 🙂
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Dear Sandra,
I’ve two brothers in law who’ve suffered the effects of Agent Orange. I’d thought to tell their stories until I started the research thread. Thank you for such a glowing comment.
I wonder if the government had any idea the far reaching devastation their combat tactic would have.
As for the heads up…you earned it! Great story. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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That was a terrible war from beginning to end. Our troops suffered as well as the Vietnamese. Who knows how much our government knew or didn’t know. The damage is done and it seems will continue. Although drugs thought beneficial are tested. It seems this destructive one wasn’t. Those responsible for giving the order to use it are now probably dead and gone. It’s a sad chapter in the history of the U.S. for sure. Powerful story and film clip, Rochelle. — Suzanne
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Dear Suzanne,
Vietnam was terrible on so many levels. The research thread led me down a very grisly path. It seems that Agent Orange destroys DNA, hence these horrid birth defects three generations later. Not to mention those, both Vietnamese and American who’ve suffered cancers and any number of physical ailments. The film clip I chose is the most innocuous of the lot. 😦
Thank you for your affirming comments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I had no idea the damage from this was still continuing. Such a powerful story, Rochelle and one that needs to be told.
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Dear Claire,
I’ve two brothers in law who served in Viet Nam. Both of them are having major health problems now attributed to Agent Orange. I’d fully intended to tell their story until I started researching. I’m still horrified by what I found.
Thank you so much for your affirming words. They mean a lot.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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as if hiroshima and nagasaki weren’t enough, great post
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Dear Arora,
Humans do find innovative ways to destroy each other, don’t they? Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I’m too young to have any memory of the Viet Nam era. It hardly ever comes up these days. Your story is a good reminder of the lingering consequences of that kind of environment. I’ve been reading a good book about the Nigeria/Biafra war. That war never gets any attention these days
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Dear Larry,
To quote Golde in Fiddler on the Roof, “Must you boast about your age.” 😉
There’s a lot of ‘forgotten’ history swept neatly under the rug. Bringing things to light seems to be a mission I’ve been given these days. Thank you for your thoughtful comments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I’ve no words, Rochelle. Tears are flowing, though. This was definitely one of your most powerful 100 words, yet.
I’m sad for your brothers-in-law as well. Not easy to be part of such a horrid experience on either side.
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Dear Dale,
Your thoughtful comments mean a lot. I take those tears as a high compliment.
Thank you and shalom,
Rochelle
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Week after week you take a very hard task of reminding us about some of the darkest times in our history. And you do it expertly. Thank you.
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Dear Loré,
It would be more fun to keep it light but this was a story that took me captive and I had to write. Thank you so much for your comments and compliments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Wow… just… wow! I’m still trying to comprehend how you packed such an emotional punch into so few words. This may be my favorite flash fiction story from you yet. Well done, Rochelle!
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Dear V.
Some weeks the words come easier than others. Thank you for your comments and compliments. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Wow Rochelle, the story is very realistic and powerful.
And the video is just gut wrenching.
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Dear Chioma,
That video was the tamest one I could find. Re my story, thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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As stated by others, this story, and the link, are a very real and graphic pictures of the atrocities that still haunt us from the consequences of war. You continue to amaze me with your ability to portray such feelings and mental pictures in so few words. To tag “like” to this is only in reference to your writing ability, not the subject. You need to be on everyone’s reading list worldwide.
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One of your hardest hitting stories yet, Rochelle. Nicely done. It seems war never really has a winner. Everyone loses in some way or another, even those who aren’t directly involved.
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Dear Adam,
The sickest part of that war was Agent Orange that keeps on destroying DNA into the third generation. I’m horrified. Re my story–thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Unfortunately it’s a gritty reality and I wish with all my heart that it hadn’t happen. What’s scarier is that we evidently haven’t learnt much over the years 😦
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Dear Graham,
What frightens me is that Agent Orange was developed by Monsanto. I could go on from there. My heart aches over this one. I wish the US would take responsibility for these genetic disasters but we don’t. Another soapbox another time.
Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I share your feelings. Thank you Rochelle, Graham
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They were cruel times. And still those people suffer.
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Indeed, Patrick. Into the third and fourth generations.
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That Agent Orange was really horrible stuff. It did terrible things to the Vietnamese and our own troops too. Great story as always, Rochelle!
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Dear Eric,
it’s a story that needs to be told. A) because the government really isn’t doing enough for these vets. How we treated them back in the day was bad enough. B) The US is doing nothing at all for the Vietnamese.
Re my story…thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Very powerful story. Perhaps having the Vietnam War playing in the background on the evening news as my lullaby as I grew up is one reason I am so against war now.
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Dear Trent,
The Viet Nam war was a constant throughout my adolescence. I can’t believe it “ended” that long ago. But for too many it will never end. Re my story. Thank you very much.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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War is evil, and the lies that war leaders tell us are even worse, if that’s possilbe.
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Got that right, Liz. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A patient at our office was a victim of agent orange during the Viet Nam war – he was a US soldier. It was heartening to see his spiritual strength grow as his body deteriorated. Thanks for the reminder of the evils of war.
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Dear Alicia,
I wonder just how many vets have been effected and don’t’ now it. My brother in law has a form of muscular dystrophy that they think is linked.One of the best lines about war came from MASH…where Hawkeye said that war was worse than hell because in hell there are no innocent bystanders.
Thank you for your thoughtful comments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Hawkeye was a very smart man.
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And war is still the only way for some… I wonder what atrocities we will find afterwards.. Agent Orange and Vietnam was so terrible on so many levels… but maybe one of the worst thing is that one of the reason of the terrible effects is that it was not the defoliating agents but contamination that caused the effects… and the companies who increased their profits by bad processing… almost more sickening than warfare itself… as usual you set the bar high for storytelling.
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Dear Björn,
I believe Monsanto (the people who brought us Agent Orange) are waging a war on humans in general. But that’s my opinion. At any rate it’s the ‘gift’ that keeps on giving. Thank you for your thoughtful comments and your compliments re my story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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‘Rochelle, the undisputed master of what I call Sound Bite Fiction.
She sets the weekly challenge, and the standard.’
This is my weekly intro to my own story, and once again you prove it to be accurate.
A piece of astonishing potency, it disturbed me without the video, which I have no intention of watching.
Our cruelty to each other is surpassed only by our indifference to the effects of our ‘weapons’.
A magnificent portrayal of evil.
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Dear CE,
I’ve read and reread your comment, savouring it like fine wine. I said that to say this, “Thank you kind sir.”
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I chose not to watch the video. Your words, to me, were graphic enough
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Dear Dawn,
And that’s why there was a warning on the video. Thank you or your comments re my story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Damn but that’s powerful.
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Thank you, Ray.
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I wonder how many more times we will witness such evils before we wake up – I don’t really want to continue down that path, because I don’t like the probable answer it will reveal. Your story is heart-breaking, Rochelle. The ending is powerful and hard-hitting.
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Dear Margaret,
I don’t think mankind will ever truly wake up. Thank you for your complimentary comments re my story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Wow! This is an extremely powerful post! I cried as I watched the video…such a horrible thing for one to have their life affected like that.
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Dear Jessie,
I agree, that video is hard to watch and it’s tame compared to some of the ones I watched. Thank you for your thoughtful comments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Wow, great story, especially the last line with the repeat of “expose the enemy”.
It’s so much worse (if that’s possible) when actions during war are being felt even today.
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Dear Ali,
Until I started the research for this story I didn’t realize how far reaching were the effects of Agent Orange. You’re the first to say anything about the deliberate repetition of “expose.”
Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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And we think we live in enlightened times. Look what we do to each other and our world. I knew about this and will just add my praise to that of the others: outstanding and powerful with a last line that takes my breath away because it is so true. The monster is in all of us.
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Dear GAH,
As the Pogo said it first, “We have seen the enemy and he is us.” Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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very powerful story. A terrible war, which they all are.
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Thank you, Ruth.
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How sad. It is horrible what we do to each other.
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It is indeed Athling. Thank you for reading.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I don’t have the heart to watch the video. The story shook me enough. With all the diseases(Zika virus now causing birth defects) and plagues…did man have to add war to the mix?
Expertly told story – The last line was powerful.
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Dear Ansumani,
Thank you for your glowing comments for my story. The video is certainly not mandatory.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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The video you shared made me want to beat my breast and cry out in pain.
Thank you for sharing your research with us.
And, as always, your story was powerful, emotionally moving, and heart-breaking — you should publish a book with all of your 100-word historical fiction responses to these photographs.
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Dear Vijaya,
The video and others that were even more graphic had the same effect on me. This one was tame by comparison.
There’s been some talk of my publishing a book of flash fiction. I haven’t acted on that yet as I have so much going on. The original thought was to have it be a book of one hundred 100 word stories. I have written many more since that conversation. The idea’s still under consideration.
Thank you as always for your glowing words re my story and my writing.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I think the Indian “Kaliyug” began with the Industrial Revolution.
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So true Rochelle. Very disturbing and moving story. You always hit with your realistic fiction. Powerful, moving and I learn something new. I feel so ignorant. Shalom.
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Dear Indira,
Don’t feel ignorant. So much of this history has been swept under the rug. Thank you for your kind and thoughtful words.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks to that we are having a look at it.
Shalom.
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war is hell. both sides of the conflict will do everything to gain an advantage.
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That’s a fact, Plaridel. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Horrific, Rochelle. Lies and more lies leaving innocents affected. Thank you for telling this story.
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Dear Laurie,
The innocents suffer the most in a war. Nobody really wins, do they? Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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And it seems to go on daily – look at the water situation in Flint – but will the government step in with the money needed to fix it? Heavens no – it won’t buy them the right politician, power, or oil well!
Very well done!
Kudos for Sandra – a truly magnificent piece!
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Dear Yolanda Renee,
I won’t comment on Flint. However I agree with you.
Thank you for your words of praise.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Such a sad true story. I lived through these times as a young adult and this was the first time that we had TV to record the atrocities. It was also sad that the Vietnam Vets were blamed for the war when they were ordered to do what they did. They did not have a choice. Many are homeless and suffer from PTSD and other mental illnesses as a result of being in the war.:(
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Dear Susan,
The treatment of those vets is something that tears at me. The war was very much a part of my adolescence. Frightening times that don’t even make today’s history books. No winners in this one.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Congratulations to your beautiful Sandra. What a lovely picture.
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Rochelle, what a haunting and disturbing story. One of the worst legacies of war is the innocent casualties who continue to suffer long after the soldiers have gone home, as in this case and in the case of landmines. Hopefully we as a species will improve with time.
Amazing story.
-David
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Dear David,
I’d like to think we learn something from history but given current events…Thank you for your thoughtful comments and compliments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Wow. I had no idea. I learn a lot from you.
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Thank you, Alice. 😀
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There is this another such incident that cursed the generations “Bhopal gas Tragedy”. Life hides the most tragic events, thanks for making people like me aware of such events.
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Dear Ira,
I know this isn’t a solo incident. How many WWI Vets were affected by mustard gas? I’m sure the list goes on. Thank you for reading and leaving thoughtful comments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, you touched me with this story as it was part of my life experience. Thank you for exposing this.
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Dear Lindy,
It’s hard for me to believe that such a huge part of my adolescence doesn’t make the history books today. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A gripping true story. Though I realize the story is likely fiction…I’m sure this scenario has played out somewhere in the real world. Tragic and frightening! 😦
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Dear Kat,
It’s fiction only in the characters, the events are true. Thank you for such a wonderful comment..
Shalom,
Rochelle
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There are no good guys in war. Very thought provoking story. It’s terrible how often uses of supposedly “harmless” chemicals are eventually proven to be anything but.
My dad’s also a Vietnam vet, but he wasn’t exposed to agent orange. He was the victim of a landmine, though. He lost an eye, part of his face and still has shrapnel in his back. The resulting medical problems have been constant ever since he came home.
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Dear Emilie,
It makes me sad to hear about your dad. You’re right there are no good guys in war. However, the Vietnam vets, in my opinion, were treated worse than others. If the horrors they suffered weren’t enough, they were vilified when they returned home. No hero’s welcome. I’ve two brothers in law suffering the effects of Agent Orange.
Thank you for sharing your story and for commenting on mine.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I was too young to fully comprehend the war. I didn’t understand why my cousin joined the army until later when I understood he didn’t have a choice. My mother was upset when they never covered the Vietnam War in my history classes at school. We do have a tendency to sweep things under the rug and change the perspective of history. I also share your fear of Monsanto and what is to come or currently happening that we will find out about later.
Another powerful piece Rochelle.
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Dear MTO,
I’m with your mother. It’s upsetting that this history isn’t taught in school. All through my adolescence the Vietnam war was all over the news. Monsanto terrifies me.
Thank you for your comments re my story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, such a powerful story. Very well done. The impact of war continues through generations and more continue to happen. When will the wars stop? The video was difficult to watch, but it is something that people should see.
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Dear Amy,
The video I shared is actually quite tame compared to some others I considered. I started out with the Agent Orange thread thinking of writing a story about a dying vet until I saw what A.O. has done to the DNA of the Vietnamese people. It’s appalling. Will wars stop? When there are no more humans, maybe.
Thank you re my story
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It’s just so heartbreaking to watch. Truly. Maybe only then, Rochelle. When we cease to walk the planet…I hope not.
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Querida Rochelle,
It’s been awhile. I’ve thought about you and your prompts often.
It’s been difficult to catch up with my 2 blogs since the holidays.
I hope to get back to some type of routine real soon. Hope you enjoy my entry
this week.
As I read you story, I was reminded of my hubby’s cousin who was a photographer
in Vietnam. He was a lover not a fighter. But, that war made so many change.
He returned home and was shortly diagnosed with prostrate cancer and other health
issues from Agent Orange. I felt his memory in every word you wrote. He often
spoke of the atroscities that were left behind there in Vietnam. He was never the
man he was before the war. The video, as graphic and as upsetting as it is, shows those tragedies very well. I emptied an entire box of tissues as I viewed it.
An extremely powerful story that’s been masterfully written. Your stories are always
thought provoking. They leave the reader begging for more.
Thank you for sharing this story in a very dignified way.
Gracias … Siempre,
Isadora 😎
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Querida Isadora,
Your tears are a high compliment.
My heart goes out to the family of your husband’s cousin. Thank you for such affirming and thoughtful comments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS I have missed you.
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A tough, ugly topic, handled eloquently in your story telling, Rochelle.
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PS) the link to Sandra’s story doesn’t work. I’ve tried a couple of times.
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It was working when I linked it. It’s not now. So I went to Sandra’s page. Not working there either. So it has something to do with their server. 😦
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Dear Dawn,
‘Nuff said. Thank you for such a lovely comment/compliment.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear She Who Shall Remain Nameless this Week,
We’ve got to find you a name. That’s too much to type. I know some GIs who were damaged by Agent Orange too. Nasty stuff. It took 30 years before the government would help them or take responsibility for what it did.
Unfortunately, we are often the enemy.
Froggy
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Dear Froggy,
I’ve been having an identity crisis and wondered what you were going to come up with. Now I shall have to wonder aimlessly and namelessly.
I’ve two brothers in law who deal with health issues due to Agent Orange. What can I say? Pogo was right.
Shalom
SWSRNTW
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Incredibly powerful and harrowing piece.
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Thank you, Michael. 😀
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That is a great line line for a powerful story. It is a bit sad that the chemical manufacturers (Dow Chemical and Monsanto) along with the US Government have not done enough to take responsibility for their actions.
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Dear Subroto,
I find the chemical companies horrifying on many levels and certainly for not taking responsibility. Thank you for your compliments re my story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A painful story. Repercussions always echo ages down. I have a friend whose parents were missionaries 20 miles from Hiroshima after the war. They are long gone but their daughter now in her 60’s, a missionary herself, has radiation poisoning from growing up in that part of Japan.
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Dear Joe,
The effects of war linger, don’t they? Viet Nam was and is being swept under the rug. I knew about the effects of Agent Orange on American vets because two of my brothers in law are suffering from it. I didn’t know what it did to the DNA of the innocent bystanders.
Some stories are painful bug beg to be written. Thank you for sharing your story and commenting on mine.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks for hosting.
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Such as awesome story! So well done Sandra… thank you for sharing it Rochelle! It is sad that the effects of war far out linger the war itself. I have Vietnamese friends and their family who still live overseas are very poor and have to live with them day after day. I’m not sure our war did them much good. But our soldiers were doing what they were told. I will always support our men and women of the military… It is also sad that our vets are not treated with more respect.
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Dear Courtney,
I had to share Sandra’s story. 😉 She’s one of the pillars of the Friday Fictioneers Community and was one who welcomed me with open arms when I was the new kid on the block.
I wholeheartedly support the military. My husband is a vet with 28 years in the Navy. I only wish our government would take responsibility for the Vietnamese victims. I’ve two brothers in law who also suffer the effects of Agent Orange, fifty years after exposure. So tried to show both sides of the story.
Thank you for your thoughtful comments and compliments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Sandra is definitely one of the best! Love her stories each week! 🙂
I’m so sorry you have family with severe affects of Agent Orange. Your story does an excellent job of showing both sides.
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A reflection of a horrific incident!
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it was horrible indeed, Colline. Thank you for commenting.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you for bring Agent Orange back into discussion. The Viet Nam vets had to fight so hard to have it’s effects recognized.
Agent Orange was produced and tested at several bases in New Brunswick Canada at a high cost for the personnel and families.
Showing the shame of the children of Agent Orange brings the horror forward — a horror we can’t ignore.
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Dear DH,
Agent Orange continues to reek havoc into the third and forth generations. It’s past time to recognize and do something about it.
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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The solider’s regret over dark things done in ignorance and in the name of country, the personal illness and impact on the children and future generations… this is a terrible tale told very well, made more awful because it’s real.
As always, well done.
KT
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Dear KT,
The Vietnam vets were sorely mistreated when they came home. A shameful piece of American history. They were following orders. My face burns with shame though when I see these children.
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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