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This week Karen posted the prompt early. And still I’m late. But that depends on your definition of late. 😉 On the other hand, the timing just might be deliberate. And…while my prompt is from Poisson-Blanc, my story veers far afield and very much about the water. Thanks as always to Karen Rawson and J Hardy Carroll for facilitating this prompt. Fun stuff. Love the extra words and a different challenge.
Genre: Historical Faction
Word Count: 150
TREADING WATER
“It’s okay, sweetheart.” Mary knelt beside her dripping daughter. “There’ll be other swim meets.”
“But I told everybody I was going to win and I came in last.”
“It’s only your first race.” Richard swept the child into his arms. “You’re only six years old, baby. Someday you’ll have a mantel full of trophies.”
“Really, Daddy?”
“Or my name isn’t Dick Chadwick.”
Five years later, Florence Chadwick won the silver cup in a race across San Diego Bay, the first of many awards.
In the 1950’s she set her goggled sights on the English Channel, ultimately swimming it four times in both directions.
On September 4, 1953, she beat the women’s and men’s records, swimming from Dover to Wissant in 14 hours and 42 minutes.
On that same Friday, across the pond, in Kansas City, Missouri, Bob and Evalyne Wisoff greeted their own little 6 lb. white fish, Rochelle Elise.
Well told, Rochelle! And Happy Birthday!
Shalom
Penny
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Dear Penny,
Just a subtle reminder. 😉 When I found out Miss Chadwick set a record on the very day I was born, I just had to go there. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS I’m still treading water to catch up with Friday Fictioneers.
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Good story and, yes, you are indeed, a fish without scales. Carry on my little dolphin.
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Dear Jan,
I’ve always been a water baby and always shall be. Thank you. ❤
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Beautiful story! Happy Birthday! It’s sometimes interesting to read about what events happened the day you were born. 🙂
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Dear Jelli,
Does this mean I was fishing for birthday wishes? 😉 I read about Florence Chadwick last year and worked it into a Friday Fictioneers story. I had to do it again. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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One should be proud of one’s borning day, eh! 🙂 Inspired me to go for a looksee of what has happened historically on my birthday… a lot of nuclear testing, assassinations, wars… at least there’s something good for yours.
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Love this! And happy birthday to you!
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Thanks, Josh. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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What a delight. Your storytelling is mesmerizing. I love all that you wound in that one. What a great little picture too!
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Dear Karen,
I just can’t resist those swimmers. 😉 Thank you for such a delightful comment/compliment.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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What a wonderful piece of history… and to fall on your birthday, to boot? Well, that is most serendipitous, isn’t it? 😉
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Dear Dale,
It’s nice to find out that something happened on one’s birthday. I first learnt of Florence Chadwick last year or the year before, now that I think about it. I worked it into a FF story then. Glad you enjoyed my bit of history(s). Thanks, friend. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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So very cool. I now want to look up what happened on mine!
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You are certainly not a fish out of water when it comes to story-telling, Rochelle. I wasn’t one hundred percent sure who the narrator was in this but it didn’t matter. It didn’t chop and change and the viewpoint was suitably omniscient to work well. Guess I really like to get into my characters, both inside and outside their real-time dialogue – which you excel at.
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Dear Kelvin,
You really nailed me. As a rule, as you already know, I write from one POV of a character whether in 1st or 3rd person. This time, I really didn’t. So it’s definitely an omniscient narrator. I’m glad it didn’t ruin it for you. Needless to say, Miss Chadwick is a personal hero. When I learned that she set a record the day I was born I had to go there. 😉 Thank you so much.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A very happy birthday Rochelle! You really were two water babies, weren’t you? Hope you have a lovely day 🙂
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Dear Lynn,
I did have a lovely birthday. I’m definitely a water baby. I celebrated by pushing myself to swim past a mile. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Glad you had a lovely day and well done for passing that mile! 🙂
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Wow! She’s incredible. Did she really come in last when she was six?
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Dear James,
I found the tidbit about her coming in last at the age of six from a lengthy interview. She came in last her next race, too. But that status didn’t last for long, did it? She was incredible. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear White Fish,
Congrats on another anniversary of your birth. I’m told that those lead to a longer life, as do activities like swimming. My favorite part of swimming was my underwater attacks on girls legs (when I was younger). Now, I’m into my “Beached Whale” phase.
Moby Dick
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Dear MD,
Every day this side of the grass is a good one I’ve heard. Sounds like you were quite the swimmer. Jan says he swims like a rock. I’ve yet to find a purple swimming pool. What’s up with that? Thank you for swallowing the bait and wishing me a happy birthday. It pays to advertise. 😉
Shalom and glug,
White (gefilte) Fish
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Dear Rochelle,
Wishing you a very Happy Birthday.
Loved the last line . Thanks for sharing something so beautiful !
Special good wishes on your special Day.
Love,
Moon.
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Dear Moon,
Thank you for the birthday wishes. I’m glad you enjoyed my story and took the time to comment. 😀 It was a lovely day, by the way.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Wow! 🙂
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Happy birthday Rochelle. My mother celebrated hers on September 3. And she is 81. 🙂
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Dear Celestine,
How blessed you are to still have your mother. I hope her birthday was a good one. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Loved this story and the personal birthday touch, Rochelle!
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Dear Ted,
I’m glad you enjoyed my ‘fish story.’ Florence Chadwick was an inspiring lady. Thank you for swimming by.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A lovely merging of history and personal. I loved the phrase “set her goggled sights”, for some reason 🙂
And happy birthday for yesterday!
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Dear Ali,
I was pleased with that line myself. Glad it worked. Thank you for the retro birthday wishes. It was a great day! Thank you. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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That’s an inspiring story. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Masterful as usual.
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Thank you, Lavanya. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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If you ever feel like swimming across the English Channel yourself, let me know and I’ll meet you on the beach and take you for a belated birthday lunch!
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Dear Keith,
I wish I could take you up on the offer. As for swimming the English Channel…I’m quite happy with my daily mile in the lap pool, Which is not to say I don’t like swimming in the Ocean. I really do…there just aren’t any near me. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A water baby! No wonder you are so cool Rochelle 😀 Many many happy returns of the day 🙂
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Dear Dahlia,
I’m very late answering this comment. At any rate, thank you for the birthday wishes and the nice comment. (About two weeks late.)
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Lovely story and Happy belated Birthday dear. I know I’m too late but better late than never. Best wishes for you. Love and hugs.
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Dear Indira
A very belated thank you for the hugs and birthday wishes.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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:), Shalom.
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Beautifully written
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Thank you very much, Short Story. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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