
PHOTO PROMPT © Sandra Crook
I couldn’t resist. Since my initial story is more of a discussion than a story, I thought I’d take the liberty of posting a second piece. And since it’s Hanukkah, the Jewish festival of lights I’ve edited a snippet from PLEASE SAY KADDISH FOR ME, my debut novel. In the scene, the Abromovich children tell the story of Hanukkah (sort of ) for their gentile guest.
Genre: Historical Fiction
Word Count: 100
LIGHT ONE CANDLE
Twelve-year-old Zelig, the quintessential scholar, pointed to each Hebrew letter on the dreidel. “They stand for ‘A great miracle happened there,’ Professor Dietrich.”
As Zelig’s younger sisters, Ruth and Rukhel, set the table, they fluttered around it chirping like excited pigeons. Ulrich could hardly tell where one left off and the other began. Even their voices were identical.
“Hanukkah is all about the Macaroons’ victory over their enemies in ancient days…It was a miracle…The oil in the temple menorah burned for eight whole days…That’s why we light the candles for eight nights.”
Zelig rolled his eyes. “It’s Maccabees not macaroons!”
Click to hear Mayim Bialik shed light on the holiday.
The Abromovich Children: B. Ruth, Rukhel, Front, left to right: Zelig, Velvil, Tuli
© Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

This is a dreidle I’ve had in my possession since I was four years old. Cheap plastic, but precious to me. The game of dreidle is one of the staples of Hanukkah. Each letter dictates whether or not the player takes a penny from the pot,tosses one in or takes them all.
I think being about Macaroons works for some people. And it makes sense since, according to the video you pointed us to, there is a lot of eating of unhealthy foods over those eight days of Hanukkah. Nice story. Kids do unintentionally say the funniest things at times 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
Dear Trent,
This is one of my favorite scenes from Please Say Kaddish for me. It just seemed to fit today. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 4 people
It was a very good fit. I’m glad you changed your mind about putting up a post 🙂 Happy Hanukkah.
LikeLike
Happy Hanukkah! Love the macaroons! When I read that in the book I started to cackle and woke hubby. It’s just too precious! Going to make me some latke’s tomorrow! Hubby presented me with a Hanukkah gift last night, early. We usually do that last night. Hope you have a grand feast of it! Shalom, Dear Rochelle, Shalom!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Dear Jelli,
You made me smile imagining your cackling waking your hubby. 😀 A good holiday to you. Chanukah Samayach!
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
That made me laugh, what a beautiful scene!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Loré! 😀 Happy to make you laugh.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
If there was a festival celebrating the Macaroon’s I would be delighted. Feeling a bit peckish now! Happy Hanukkah Rochelle.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Iain,
I do enjoy a crunchy sweet Macaroon. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hehe you didn’t resist for long!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Nope. 😉 I couldn’t resist. Thanks for reading, Louise. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Never resist!
LikeLike
Live and learn: I haven’t read enough about Hanukkah to know it celebrates the Maccabees’ victories. It’s been years since we read that bit of history — must reread it now.
I really like way you’ve portrayed the girls, esp. the phrase “Ulrich could hardly tell where one left off and the other began.”
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Christine,
I have seen identical twins that finish each other’s sentences.Two girls sharing one heart and one soul. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
A great little story within a story. However, now I taste macaroons. Or is that macaroni? Anyway, a good lesson with a little humor. Life without humor is a dull life. Carry on m’luv. P. S., great art as well as writing.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Dear Jan
I’m happy to see you’re not cloaked in “Anonymous” this week. 😉 Thank you on all accounts, m’luv. ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yay! You did a story after all. A sweet one, Rochelle, sweet as a macaroon
LikeLiked by 2 people
Dear Neil,
It’s all your fault. 😉 I really didn’t have any intention of posting a second piece until I read your comment. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Blame happily shouldered
LikeLiked by 1 person
I already love the characters in your short excerpt. I often wonder as to how good writers manage to say so much in 100 words. I hope I can read the book soon. I really love your paintings too. Beautiful! It must take so much to develop one character, let alone the many characters with distinctive traits, in a book. Awe-inspiring, indeed!
A happy Hanukkah to you and all at your home, Rochelle.
Love,
Moon
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Moon,
I’m always happy when someone declares a desire to read my books. 😉 I do love these characters who, to me, are very real people. There’s something tangible about character development. At least for me, once a character was born, he or she seemed to write him or herself. I used to think that authors who said that were crazy until I experienced the same thing. Thank you so much for commenting on both my blogs today.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wait. You mean it wasn’t the great Battle of the Cookies? That one goes on for a lifetime. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Alice,
Oh those things between siblings. My brother and I still carry on our childhood squabbles even though we’re both well past it. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
This is great. Kids always get the words wrong. And thanks for the reminder about macaroons. There’s a French bakery a couple blocks from where I’m staying (but they call it macaron).
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Josh,
Actually macarons aren’t the same as macaroons. Marcarons are an upscale cookie. They were just coming into vogue as I was going out of style at the bakery. 😉 Glad you liked my story and took the time out to say so.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
What a sweet, warm tale! Love the mistaken Macaroons too! A spot on family dynamic, that groaning over the mistake. And thank you for sharing the tid bit about the driedle – I’ve heard the word before but didn’t know what it meant. Your plastic one clearly holds some special memories. A very happy Hanukkah to you and your family
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Lynn,
No doubt that little dreidel cost a whole penny back in the 1950’s. I’ve not seen another quite like it and am surprised it has survived all these many years. It does hold some very special childhood memories indeed. Thank you re my story. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Little things that mean so much. It’s not always items of high monetary value that we cherish the most. My pleasure
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love when kids mistake their words- their remembery is so full of stuff! Loved this scene… okay, okay. Loved them all!
Happy Chanukah, my friend!
Lotsa love,
Dale
LikeLiked by 2 people
Dear Dale,
I still remember when my eldest son was maybe 6 or 7 and came home from school to inform me that in some countries fish eyes were considered a great delicatessen. 😀 As Art Linkletter wrote over half a century ago, “kids say the darndest things.” Thank you for indulging me twice today. ❤
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
When Iain was maybe 2, he’d watch Toy story. Where all other kids would be saying “To infinity and beyond!”, he’d say “You cup of swine!” Instead of “You uncultured swine” (Mr. Potato Head to Hamm)
LikeLike
I love the descriptions of the sisters Ruth and Rukhel. They’re interesting characters. I’ll confess I’d never looked up the meaning of the Menorah. As always it’s fun to learn from you during your stories. The Macaroon mixup was hilarious. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Eric,
I loved the twins. Writing them was so enjoyable. 😀 Glad you enjoyed them, too. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
You paint a happy, warm picture of a family preparing excitedly to celebrate Hanukkah. I’m glad you decided to write a story after all!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Penny,
Writing a second story that is actually a story seemed the right thing to do. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Ha ha – great last line!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Susan,
I’m glad liked that last line. It’s always a challenge when distilling a book excerpt into a flash fiction to find the best place to end. And thank you for indulging me not once, but twice. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
They got it so close, except for the Macaroons, how funny! Kids are like that, though, misinterpreting words the way they make sense in kid-language.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Joy,
Of course the kids in my story are actually speaking Yiddish so I’m not sure how that would sound in reality. 😉 I still remember some of the great ways my kids ‘played’ with language. One of my favorites was “Hamurmer” for “Hamburger.” Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ha! Just looked up the Yiddish translations…spot on. 😀
LikeLike
When you’re writing in a language different from what your characters are speaking, I think you have to take poetic license like that. I have the same thing with my fictional world; they’re speaking a number of foreign (made up) languages, not English, obviously, but sometimes I’ll have a joke or trick about how words rhyme, or how two words sound alike. Of course, in some other language those two words might be completely unrelated, but… suspend thy disbelief, my dear reader!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Precisely. 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Loved it! How could I not love humor put into something so serious?
Mine should be up soon.
Scott
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Scott,
I find that humor lightens heaviness. My family has almost been testimony to this. Even at funerals. 😉 Perhaps we’re strange that way. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Not strange – enlightened…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Macaroons!!! Ha ha ha ha! I guess I will have to read your book for similar insights into the Jewish culture 🙂
LikeLike
Dear Anurag
Naturally, I hope you will read my books. 😉 I actually learned much more about my own culture than I actually knew. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad you ‘spun’ out a second story. It was worth the wait. I take it you do spin that dreidle?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Sandra,
Yes, I do spin the dreidle. In Hebrew it’s actually called Saveevon which means to spin. 😉 Your comment makes me laugh. Thank you. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Haha! Thank you for sharing Hanukkah with us in this sweet scene, Rochelle. I loved the last sentence! Happy Hanukkah to you and your family! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Jan,
I’m pleased you enjoyed this scene. It”s always fun to revisit my people from my novels. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
What a delightful scene you’ve set before us. Now I need a macaroon!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Keith,
Thank you for such a sweet comment.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
I love the image of the kids zooming around setting the table. And now I know what a “dreidel” is. I was about to Google “Macaroons”, wondering if the biscuit was named after an ancient people but didn’t need to 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Ali,
Always happy to impart ‘knowledge’…rather, trivia. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wonderful story, full of smiles and good feelings and excitement. And I loved the Macaroons 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Linda,
Thank you for your sweet comment. I enjoyed writing this scene in the book and it was fun to revisit and edit it into a flash. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Brothers can be real little know-alls, can’t they?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Liz,
My brother still is a know it all. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Ha! Great snippit Rochelle. Macaroons…. I’m suddenly Hungary
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Laurie,
I just might have boosted macaroon sales around the world. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
My niece once called Shetland Ponies Sh*tland ponies. Kids can be so innocent with there words. Well done.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Susan,
I won’t repeat what my friend’s young son used to call a truck. 😉 Gotta love it. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love your characters and seeing your own dreidle.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Irene,
I had a good time revisiting this scene. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
A lovely little bit of history weaved into an everyday slice of life. Both the artwork and the story are par excellence. Always a pleasure to read you, dear Rochelle.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Neel,
This is a favorite scene of mine in my first novel. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the pleasure of your sweet comment.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Such a happy warm story Rochelle 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
A warm and happy thank you, Dahlia. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Rochelle, I like the “macaroons” comment – that was cute. Your story was too. You make me laugh!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Nan,
Kids do have a way of twisting words, don’t they? Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
I love it when someone mis-uses or mis-reads a word. My son once read Meridian as Merry Diane!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Clare,
Kids are so much fun with language, aren’t they? Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Dear Rochelle
How lovely to be re-aquainted with Please Say Kaddish For Me – an old friend I never want to say goodbye to.
This was my favourite simile in your flash.
…they fluttered around it chirping like excited pigeons.
Shalom
Kelvin
P.S. I hope I am not too late to wish you happy Hanukkah!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Kelvin,
I loved the twins…all these children really. Thank you for your kind words. And today is the fifth day of Hanukkah…sixth candle is lit tonight. The Jewish day begins at sundown. So, you’re most definitely not too late to wish me a happy Hanukkah. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
This is so lovely… the Macaroons sounds so much tastier though…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Björn,
As I’ve said before, I think I might have bolstered international macaroon sales this week. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Lovely and amusing little tale Rochelle.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Michael. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for my afternoon smile 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Always happy to give smiles, Dawn. 😀 Thank you for returning one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
The Macaroons – haha! Glad you decided to post a story after all. A sweet tale that unfolded in front of my eyes. 🙂
LikeLike
And of course, happy Hanukkah!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you on both accounts, Magarisa. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re most welcome, Rochelle.
Shalom shalom,
Magarisa
LikeLike
“The Macaroons” works well for me 🙂 Reminds me of the time in school when a fellow student was reading out a story which involved a reference to the ‘The Kaaba’. Must have been close to lunch (and he loved his food) he read it out as ‘kebab’. He was reminded of this slip long after it had happened and ultimately it passed into schoolboy’s lore.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Subroto,
Kebab always sounds good to me. 😉 Those are the kinds of slips that tend to follow us for life. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Hehehe ahh children, gotta love them, and their quirkiness.
we had neighbor kids over today, we were making the gingerbread pieces for our ginger verse, and, I was running late, I was in my Shinto robes after performing a funeral for an elder I had met on my journey to becoming priestess, thankfully, my aunt and mom had started the baking process for me and I had already made all of the dough the night before.. One of the little girls looks at me, my robes, and then around my house, She says, “sin, why is your house full of Christmas if you aren’t allowed to celebrate it?”
I said, ” I am free to celebrate anything I choose, who said that?”
“I read online that Shintos don’t celebrate Christmas.” We don’t have a specific Christmas holiday like Christians or Jewish people, or many other religions do.. but it doesn’t mean I’m not allowed to celebrate Christmas…”
She let out this really long, frustrated sigh followed by her little sister”ugh! Relics are soooo confusing.”
I loved this though, I think, I must find it and read it soon 😀
♥Sin
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Sin,
Fascinating story here of your own. Thank you for sharing it with me. Glad you liked my little snippet. 😀 Many thanks for commenting.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Love the girls’ chattering voices. And macaroons-maccabees. It’s an easy mistake to make.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Sarah Ann,
I’m so glad you enjoyed. When my boys were little I kept lists of their mispronunciations. Too cute. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person