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Genre: Hysterical Fiction (Wow, what a rush!)
Word Count: 100
If this is phto and story’s deja vu for you, it’s true. This is a rerun of a rerun. I wrote it in 2013 and posted it again in 2016 for the same reason I’m posting it this week. It has been an incredibly busy week and my muse is flat comatose. Since the high holidays are upon us, I take liberty…because I can.
If you’ve posted a story for this photo before, feel free to give yourself a break and post it again. Hey. It’s been 6 years. 😉 Who’s going to remember it? Right? Of course, right!
ASHAMNU
Rhoda cast furtive glances in all directions, inhaled throat-burning smoke, held it, and then exhaled, handing the joint to Marcus.
“Don’t be so paranoid.” His bloodshot eyes glittered.
Candles illuminated the corners of his darkened bedroom. In-A-Gadda-Da-Vida blared from the stereo and patchouli incense tickled her nose.
After they’d downed an entire bag of chips, Marcus plopped his yarmulke on his head.
“So much for fasting. Let’s get back before they miss us.”
Side-by-side they sneaked into the synagogue and giggled through repentance prayers.
Every year afterward, when Rhoda dutifully attended services, she chuckled as she recalled the “High” Holiday.
The Ashamnu is a traditional prayer of repentance recited on Yom Kippur, the Jewish highest of holy days or day of atonement. The word “ah-SHAM-nu” means we are guilty or we have sinned.
That would be one way to ensure attendance!
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Dear Tanille,
Well…attendance after a fashion. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Hilarious story Rochelle
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Thank you, Sadje. Sorry for the late reply.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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No worries! You’re welcome Rochelle
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They’ve definitely earned the right to repentence
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Dear Neil,
True, but I fear they weren’t all that repentent. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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There’s always room for a bit of harmless fun! Great photo too.
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Dear Iain,
What can I say? They were young. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I love it.
Absolutely lovely.
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Thank you, Chioma. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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At least they accept they have sinned.
There are many who wouldn’t acknowledge this reality 🙂
Of course you can take liberty, Rochelle!
Am participating for the first time for this picture. Interesting one 🙂
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Dear Anita,
I’m not sure how aware they were of their sin at that time. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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lol, yep, a new meaning for “high holidays”.
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Dear Trent,
I couldn’t help myself. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I don’t remember this prompt, or your story. So perhaps I’m losing my memory, or perhaps I hadn’t joined FF yet–so I had the pleasure of reading this for the first time :
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Dear Linda,
I posted this originally in 2013 and reran it again in 2017. There’s a good chance you hadn’t joined this motley crew yet. 😉 Glad you enjoyed.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I wasn’t around for this one either, and I loved your story. Very true to life.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Dear Rowena,
Oh it’s very true to life. 😉 The names have been changed but really protect no one. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Definitely one way to celebrate a holiday. I enjoyed how you described the setting here.
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Dear Lisa,
It’s almost like I was there. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, you are very welcome.
Shalom,
Lisa
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Oddly, I can picture this scene all too well! According to the calendar and what I was told, I was born on Yom Kippur… always begged the question of was it because I was the sin or the atonement. Love the picture of you silly faced. 🙂 ❤
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Dear Bear,
Now there’s a question. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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This is delightful, Rochelle!
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Thank you so much, Keith.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Oh my, Rochelle,
There is nothing like a flat muse. Since I’m a relative newbie, I’d not seen any of this before. Love that pic!
So many times as a child I would look at someone and start laughing, unable to control it and getting into trouble. I remember the times most fondly, forgetting whatever consequences there may have been.
Peace,
Bill
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Dear Bill,
Some folks elicit laughter, don’t they? I’m glad my…um…er “fiction” was new to you. I count on that when I post a rerun. Some of us have been doing this FF thing for years. In fact this month marks my 10th year as facilitator. I just can’t seem to quit. Thank you for joining and being such an entertaining part of it.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Happy 10th year celebration of your wonderfulness and excellent facilitating.
i need to find a lane today. I’ll be thinking of you when I do.
Peace,
Bill
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I have to laugh at this story as I know the history. Good job.
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Dear Jan,
History? What history? It’s fiction. 😉 Thanks, M’luv
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A story that is as mischievous as the characters, no doubt a true encounter.
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Dear James,
I can neither confirm nor deny that this is a true encounter. 😉 (Well it might be true.) Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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this reminds me of what grace hopper said, It’s easier to ask forgiveness than it is to get permission. 🙂
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Dear Plaridel,
Love the Grace Hopper quote. I’ve used it more than once. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Very funny and I love the photo 🙂
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Thank you, Angela. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Excellent!
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Thank you, Stars. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Oh well … 😉 Some may say that the Allmighty would have known one’s intention all along, anyway … 😉 Also, I’m a high admirer of being the best one can be EVERY DAY and not only on the one day… so, yeah … 😉
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Na’ama Y’karah,
I’m in agreement with you. I’ve no respect for those who fast and “repent” once a year so they can be written in the Book of Life and act like hell the rest of the time.
Happy to see you here.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, my friend. I’ve missed doing more of this!
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Dear Rochelle,
Elicited the same giggle 😉 You are such a bad girl!
Shalom and lotsa high love,
Dale
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Dear Dale,
Moi? No, no. It was Rhoda. Glad it made you giggle again. 😉 😀
Shalom and lotsa munchie hugs,
Rochelle
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😉🚬
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Of course it was!!
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