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This week has been a busy one which didn’t leave much headspace for writing even one hundred words. So I’m sharing a pared down excert from my WIP “LAST DANCE WITH ANNIE”. I’m in the midst of what we’re hoping is the final round of line edits. My use of the prompt is quite loose. 😉
Genre: Realistic Fiction
Word Count: 100
LOVE AND WAR
Tony studied his friend CPO Marco Sanchez. Marco’s golden-haired fiancée sent him a ‘Dear John’ letter while he dodged VC sniper fire in Vietnam as a medical corpsman. When he came back to the states in 1970, he met and married Carla who succumbed to cancer ten years later, leaving Marco to raise three sons.
“How do you do it?”
“Sense of humor.” Marco shrugged. “Carlita always told me if we divorced, she’d make sure I got custody. Said she’d hire ‘lack-of-character’ witnesses. Prove she was an unfit mother. Guess she got the last laugh.” He grinned. “Lunch at Ruby’s?”




Wry humour and great characterisation!
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Thank you so much, Joyful. Nice to see you back. Kia Ora. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Carla sounds a great character
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Thank you, Neil.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Sometimes you need that sense of humor to survive. Looks like Marco has a very good one.
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Dear Trent,
I once had a therapist tell me that my sense of humor is what kept me from jumping off a buidling. I told him I’m afraid of heights. 😉 Marco, although a minor character in the novel, is one of my favorites. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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lol, the perfect response.
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Humor can tide us through some tough situations.
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So true, Sadje. Thank you. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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You’re welcome ☺️
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I can’t wait to read my autographed copy when it comes out. I recognize several of the lines in this great little story.
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Dear Jan,
I guess you’ll just have to wait, m’dear. 😉 I figured you’d recognize the lines. Glad you recognized my inspiration for Marco. 😀
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Humor is a must.
(So is nature. Then again, nature can be hilarious, too!)
🙂
Hugs!
Na’ama
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Na’ama Y’karah,
Survival of daily life requires a sense of humor, doesn’t it? Even more so when tragedy strikes. It doesn’t mean we deny the sadness, we just don’t allow it to devour us. At least that’s the goal, right? Of course right. 😀 Thank you for the hugs. Back atcha.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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xoxo
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A good sense of humour helps.
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Yes, indeed, Diana. A sense of humor does help. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Aww…this touched my heart.
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So glad, Dawn. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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There is healing in humor. Good story proving it.
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Dear Lisa,
I’m a firm believer in the healing powers of humor as long as it’s not a mask to hide behind. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, you are very welcome.
Shalom,
Lisa
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Sometimes all there is left to keep our sanity is humour. Well done, R.
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Thank you, Tannille.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Wow, almost a true story, including the names. Yes, I can relate to to the courage to carry on.
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Dear James,
They say write what you know. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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People who love each other usually share private little jokes, and he’s holding onto that memory, part of their lives together that he treasures. Lovely story.
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Dear Margaret,
You are spot on. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Wow, my hat off to him. I struggle to maintain my sense of humour sometimes with two kids and a husband! Hope the business is of the good kind.
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Dear Jen,
The business is the Navy…definitely a good one. 😉 Sometimes one has to laugh to keep from crying. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Love the characters.
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Thank you, Athling.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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What a lovely story and once again great characters.
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Dear Gabi,
Glad you thought so. Thank you very much.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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What’s life without humor? Lovely snippet, makes one want to know more. All the best 🙂
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Dear Dahlia,
Thank you for such a lovely comment. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Turning the wreckage of life into something useful, even beautiful?
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Dear Linda,
Beauty for ashes. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Humour is mankind’s greatest blessing – so said Mark Twain! Nice one, Rochelle.
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Dear Keith,
Well said. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Carla obviously rated his parenting skills highly.
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She did, Liz. And she wouldn’t have been disappointed. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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glad he kept his sense of humor intact to survive. 🙂
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Me, too. Thank you, Plaridel.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Loose or not, I like this 😉 I love Marco’s way of looking at things and can relate!
Shalom and lotsa humourous love,
Dale
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Dear Dale,
I know how well you can relate to my fictitious Marco in reality. Thank you. 😀
Shalom and lotsa humorous hugs,
Rochelle
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😉😊
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We all need a sense of humour to get us through life’s lows, thanks for sharing your work Rochelle 💕
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Dear Angela,
A sense of humor is essential. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A sense of humor is key in life! I hope you have a less busy weekend, Rochelle. 🙂
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Dear Brenda,
It’s looking like busy times ahead. A sense of humor is definitely required. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Oh poor thing, what a life. Sounds like they were adorable together
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Dear Laurie,
I think they had a great life together while it lasted. Marco is one who’ll carry on with a sense of humor. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Carlita’s sense of humor sure rubbed off of on him … It’s what works in the end. Good on him.
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Dear Brit,
I think Marcos and Carlita complemented each other. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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amazing story Richelle! An oldie, but a goodie! Be well!
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Dear Carol Anne,
I’m glad you enjoyed. It’s actually an except from my latest novel LAST DANCE WITH ANNIE. Thank you. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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