Like us on Facebook
The next photo is the PROMPT. Remember, all photos are property of the photographer, donated for use in Friday Fictioneers only. They shouldn’t be used for any other purpose without express permission. It is proper etiquette to give the contributor credit.
PHOTO PROMPT © Sandra Crook
This weekend is Rosh HaShanah, the beginning of the Jewish New Year. So it seemed the time to remember.
Genre: Realistic Fiction
Word Count: 100
SURVIVAL
Risa kissed her slice of bread before slathering it with butter and taking a bite. She ate slowly, savoring every morsel.
Ten-year-old Aaron’s gaze held her, his brown eyes wide. “Bubbe, why do you kiss your bread like you would kiss a holy book if you had dropped it?”
“Bread is holy and precious. In the camp, a slice of bread could buy a bag of gold. A slice of bread stood between life and death.”
Aaron kissed his toast. “Blessed are You, Adonai our God Who brings forth bread from the earth and saved my dear grandma with it.”
*******





Wow! That’s powerful indeed. So often we eat without even acknowledging our food, forgetting it stands between life and death for some.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Joy,
It’s easy to take something like food for granted until it becomes scarce or is taken away. I can’t imagine that kind of hunger and for that I’m grateful. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Aaron may need a trip to a farm, a mill, and a bakery to fully understand bread. Nice one, Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Neil,
It wouldn’t hurt Aaron to learn where his bread comes from. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
A moving take on the prompt Rochelle. We do take bread for granted, don’t we? Happy Rosh HaShanah Rochelle. May it be a happy and healthy one for you and your family.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Sandra,
I’m as guilty as the next person for taking bread/food in general, for granted. Thank you for your kind comments. And thank you for the photo. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
We have a few beliefs here – 1. don’t spill salt or you’ll have to pick it up with your eyelids in afterlife. 2. Don’t let milk go down the drain as the cow can seek revenge. The stories were probably framed to conserve food items considered essential.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Reena,
If those are true, there’s a cow looking for me somewhere. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
😀😀
LikeLike
A sweet, heartfelt story
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Sadje. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome
LikeLike
A powerful story, and such a vast contrast between the location of the photo and the place Risa survived.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Trent,
And contrast was my aim. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
I haven’t done this in years. Thought I would jump back in.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Alastair,
Welcome back. I hope you liked my story. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
I did. I always like how you bring something from your experience, or your knowledge into your stories.
LikeLike
It is said that bread is the staff of life. A lovely stort Rochelle.
LikeLiked by 1 person
So much we take for granted, and so easy to see the horrors of history as ‘other’. Stories like your remind us how close we are to them.
Happy Rosh HaShanah, I hope the coming year brings many joys and blessings to you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Jen,
I know I take food for granted and get crabby when I don’t get exactly what I have a taste for. Rosh HaShanah is a good time to count those blessings. Thank you for your kind words.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Dear Keith,
As Joni Mitchell wrote, “Don’t it always seem to go that we don’t what we’ve got til it’s gone.” Okay, that might be a stretch. But I know I take food for granted. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
A huge story told in just a few words.
There is a reason that Jesus is called the Bread of life; that bread itself is called the “staff of life”; that the French Revolution included a call for daily bread. I could go on and on. My husband’s German grandmother remembered stories of people standing in line with a wheelbarrow full of nearly useless paper marks, just for a loaf of bread. She came to America around 1900 to fulfill a marriage contract made at her birth, but her twin sister remained in Germany and told of the daily struggle for bread. And they were not Jews.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear LInda,
Struggling and starvation is universal…not reserved for the Jews. 😉 Thank you for sharing your husband’s grandmother’s story. It’s amazing what people have lived through and risen above, isn’t it? Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
A good reminder that some simple things that we give little thought to are essential for life. I certainly know that bread is Important. I need my bread. Good story.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Dear Jan,
It’s so easy to take the little things we have for granted, isn’t it? Thank you, m’luv.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Powerful storytelling, Rochelle.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Lisa.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Rochelle, you’re most welcome.
Shalom,
Lisa
LikeLike
Dear Granny Tadpole W(T)F,
My compliments on the story. Bread is indeed the staff of life. But let’s talk about wine.
Tell us what it was like when Jesus turned the water into wine at the wedding. Weren’t you working with the waitstaff that night? Or had you slipped out for a quick dip in the Sea of Galilee?
Hopefully, you returned before the wine was all gone and painted a picture of the empty container the next day.
Cheers,
Virgil Bunyan
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Virgil,
If you must know, the Sea of Galilee Is crisp and clear. A great place to swim. As for the wedding…hyuk hyuk hyuk! You aren’t that far behind me, sonny. 😉
And it’s always wine o’clock.
Thank you for skulking by. Always happy to see your white hair on the squares.
Off to swim now.
Shalom,
Granny Tadpole W(T)F
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Rochelle,
The bread was their life at the camp just as Jesus is our living Bread now.
Beautiful story about survival and a lesson for us to be thankful and not take anything for granted. I love the little boy’s prayer at the end.
Shalom,
Adele
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Adele,
Thank you for your wonderfully affirming comments.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Such a powerful and heart-warming story 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Bernadette.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very thought provoking, I will begin to think about what I am thanking God for when I bless my food
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear John,
It’s easy to rattle off a memorized prayer over our meals without putting much thought or true thanks into it, isn’t it? Thank you for coming by and taking the time to comment.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
a timely story for the beginning of the jewish new year. thanks for sharing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Many thanks, Plaridel. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi Rochelle – I must have copied the wrong link the first time around. James told me the link led to a different story. My apologies. Would you be able to remove my submission with The Elephant’s Trunk logo? I replaced the wrong story with the correct one. Thank you. Nancy
LikeLike
Done
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, luv!
LikeLike
😁😘
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your story is beautiful. We should all be as grateful and mindful of our many blessings. Thank you, Rochelle!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Nancy,
Glad you enjoyed my story. May we all be grateful for what we have. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Peace to you, Rochelle ✌🏼
LikeLike
A simply beautiful story, Rochelle. I wish I could keep pressing the like button all night! Shana tovah to you and your family.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Michael,
Your comment leaves me smiling all over. Thank you so much. Shana tovah to you and yours and an easy fast.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very powerful read Rochelle ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Angela. ❤
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thoughtful story. Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Many thanks, Dawn. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for this timing, Rochelle. As so many break bread in holiday celebration, so important to remember all those who never would again, and all those who had survived, in spite of ugliness and deliberate cruelty. And to remember all those who, today, these very times, are starving, and for whom a slice of bread, too, can mean the difference between life and death. As humanity, we ought to do better. And we can.
Shana Tova and may it be a year that opens portals of kindness and humanity, and bread-enough to all,
Na’ama
LikeLiked by 1 person
Na’ama Y’karah,
I can’t add much to your affirming and beautiful comment. Thank you so much. Shana Tovah to you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Shana Tova, my friend!
LikeLike
I don’t think those of us who never were close to starving can ever truly understand the value of a slice of bread or bowl of rice. But we could be more interested and mindful towards food and how it, and wealth, is distributed. A very powerful story Rochelle. Never forget.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Gabi,
It’s appalling how many are starving while others have plenty. I can’t say I’m the best at mindfulness. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Risa’s ritual reminds her to always appreciate what she has, and it also serves to teach Aaron. Your story captures beautifully the relationship between these two, and the importance of symbols and memory in our lives. Thank you for the article, too. Horrifying, but important that we never let such horrors be forgotten or denied. Personal stories are the best way to honour and memorialise them.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Margaret,
Thank you for a most beautiful and affirming comment.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome Rochelle.
LikeLike
So easy to take for granted what so many still don’t have
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Laurie,
It is easy to take what we have for granted. Thank you for reading and commenting. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Woops hit enter too fast. So easy to take for granted. What so many still don’t have but also what was take from them… simple life pleasures. Such a terrible thing to have to remember from a person’s youth. Hard watching but a necessary watch too.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Again, I totally agree. 😉 Thank you, Laurie. For some reason I have to watch my trash folder for your comments. Not sure why but they always go there. Cray-cray. I have a few others that do the same thing.
Shalom,
Rochelle.
LikeLiked by 1 person
A necessary reminder for all of us not to take our daily bread for granted.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Dahlia,
A little reminder doesn’t hurt. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
It’s amazing how precious the things we take for granted can be in the right… or wrong circumstances.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Nobbin,
It’s so easy to take things for granted…until they’re taken from us. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
A beautiful story Rochelle! It must’ve been so hard in the concentration camps, we really have no idea how tough it was for the people who had to live in them!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Carol Anne,
I personally can’t imagine how people survived the camps. Such barbarism and cruelty is unimaginable.
And how gratifying it is to know that someone is still reading my past stories. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike