20 October 2023

Published October 18, 2023 by rochellewisoff

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Genre: Realistic Fiction
Word Count: 100

HATIKVAH

Hoping for safety in the bomb shelter, Adeena closed her eyes and prayed while missiles exploded overhead.  

Stories of butchery filled the airwaves. Whole families had been murdered in their homes.

Adeena’s thoughts turned to her Savta who had come to this land as a young woman after surviving Ravensbrück and Bergen Belson. She and Saba had risen above the horror and made a life for themselves and their children on a Kibbutz.

Murmuring the words of the Kaddish, Adeena’s heart ached for her grandmother, slaughtered only yesterday while cradling her newborn great-grandchild.

“Never again,” Adeena whispered, “is happening now.”

Hatikvah means “The Hope” and is the title of Israel’s national anthem.

65 comments on “20 October 2023

  • Dear Rochelle,

    A perfectly told story that is being lived right now. Never again – we can say it all we want but the actions of those who don’t care, erase them over and over.

    Shalom and lotsa of safe love,

    Dale

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  • I heard a poll today, that 51% of people think there is no hope for lasting peace in the region. I’m afraid I’m part of the majority on this one. Too much history, too many clashes both military and ideological.
    Powerfully written, Rochelle.

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    • Dear Linda,

      I’ve read this quote many times recently. Sad but true. These people put their own children in harm’s way and then cry that the evil Israelis murdered their babies. How twisted is that? Thank you for reading and commenting.

      Shalom,

      Rochelle

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  • This is a sad story of current news. Hatred of people based on religion, ethnicity or other ideology is something that, alas, will probably never disappear although what a world we could have if it did. I have traveled the World and have found that most people all want the same thing. To live in peace and harmony.

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    • Dear David,

      What baffles my mind is that these “people” rejoice at the death of innocents and believe they are doing their god a great service. They are worse than the Nazis who, when the end was near, wanted to hide their crimes. These animals post photos of their “conquests” all over social media.
      Okay…now that I’ve escalated to the boiling point I’ll stop and say thank you for reading and commenting.

      Shalom,

      Rochelle

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  • Dear Rochelle – This has left me profoundly sad. I am numb and brokenhearted from the news reports and didn’t think I had any feelings left but your story has proven me wrong. It is deeply sorrowful yet beautifully written. So very, very sad. I have no other words. Peace and love.

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  • It’s the innocent people who get caught up in the middle that make these things so much more horrific. Soldiers killing soldiers is bad enough, but I can’t imagine the mentality that allows people to slaughter innocent, defenseless people.

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