23 February 2024

Published February 21, 2024 by rochellewisoff

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Genre: Historical Fiction
Word Count: 100

HOMECOMING

Cradling her infant son in her arms, Savannah’s heart swelled as her husband Emmet hammered the final nail into their cabin. After grueling weeks of travel in a covered wagon, she relished the warm Kansas breeze on her face.

Emmet walked backward to admire his handiwork. “It ain’t a palace, but it’s ours.”

The newborn squirmed and nuzzled Savannah’s breast. She gazed at his round bronze cheeks with pride.

“No more auction block of us, my little angel. We home now.”

“Freedom!” Encircling his arm around her, Emmet grinned. “Our own stores. Our own church. Our own town. Nicodemus, Kansas.

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62 comments on “23 February 2024

  • I commented and moved on too quickly without clicking the infinity of buttons that WordPress requires to comment these days. So if this appears twice…

    I enjoyed the story, the sense of new beginnings and the name Nicodemus brought back memories of my days in Sunday School. 

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    • Dear Sandra,

      No worries, your comment only came through once, so you must’ve done something right.

      Interestingly, the jury’s out as to whether or not they named the town after the Bible character or someone else. At any rate, thank you for your comments and compliments.

      Shalom,

      Rochelle

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  • A great history lesson of brave souls carving out an uncertain future in an unknown land. Of course, this is the history of all pioneers. It takes a lot of faith and fortitude to proceed. The link gives a nice short history as well.

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  • I have to ask: Is this before or after John Brown and “Bleeding Kansas”? Or perhaps it’s in the links. It would make a difference in how difficult it may have been to establish such a town.

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  • A wonderful story. I can imagine the joy these people must have felt, being finally free to own their own lives and futures, something that every human being should have. Thanks for the link, too. Fascinating history.

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    • Hi Boz,

      Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. The name of the challenge is a bit misleading. When it started most posted on Friday. Now, I post the prompt on Wednesday. It goes live at 2:30am CST. You may post your story anytime between Wednesday and the following Tuesday. The link closes at 7:00pm Tuesdays. Thank you for asking.

      Shalom,

      Rochelle

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