13 December 2024

Published December 11, 2024 by rochellewisoff

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Genre: Fiction
Word Count: 100

PACKRATS AND OTHER HOARDERS


Dennis looked over Charlotte’s shoulder at her bulky pickup list. “Wrecked bicycle. Check. Commodore computer. Wait! Not my bench!”


“Anyone who sits on it risks getting a butt full of splinters.”


“I’ll take my chances.” He sank down. “This is where I used to sing Abby to sleep, help her with her homework, and wait for her to come home from her dates. My claw marks are still on the armrests.”


A small boy crawled onto Dennis’s lap. “I want to sit on Grandpa’s special bench, too.”


Charlotte crossed out bench. “You win.”


Dennis frowned. “Now, about that Commodore computer.”

43 comments on “13 December 2024

  • That’s why I did the downsizing weedle out while Hubby was at work! LOL! He had old electronic junk that he’s never touched in twenty plus years. It mysteriously found it’s way out of the house and down to the dumpster the morning of trash day. Do I feel bad or guilty… NO! I’m still having to weedle down further because there’s just no place to put things in our new place, and I can’t stand living among plastic bins any longer!

    Shalom, Bear

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  • Rochelle, I see we both had a broken bike in our stories. 🙂 I had a Commodore 64 back when I was young. I’m not sure when my parents got rid of it but it would be an antique by now. This reminds me of trying to get rid of things and trying to tear myself out despite the nostalgia. Great job.

    -David

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    • Dear Nobbin,

      I’ve always referred to us as packrats. Not really hoarders. We lived next door to some hoarders years ago…that’s something else. I do have a hard time when I go to rummage through and toss. I get caught up in memories and then it’s all she wrote. Thank you for understanding.

      Shalom,

      Rochelle

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