HAPPY NEW YEAR and LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!
WELCOME TO FRIDAY FICTIONEERS
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We are a growing community of blogging writers who come together each week from all parts of the globe to share individual flash fictions from a single photo prompt. The prompt goes up early Wednesday morning CST to give each writer time to compose a story by Friday. Some use the photo as a mere inspiration while others use it as an illustration. Use your imagination and think outside the box.
WARNING! This is an addiction for which there is no 12 step recovery program.
THE CHALLENGE:
Write a one hundred word story that has a beginning, middle and end. (No one will be ostracized for going over or under the word count.)
THE KEY:
Make every word count.
THE RULES:
- Please copy your URL to the Linkz collection. You’ll find the tab following the photo prompt. It’s the little white box to the left with the blue froggy guy. Click on it and follow directions. This is the best way to get the most reads and comments. PLEASE BE CERTAIN YOUR LINK IS SPECIFIC TO YOUR FLASH FICTION.
- Please make sure your link works. If you find that you’ve made an error you can delete by clicking the little red ‘x’ that should appear under your icon. Then re-enter your URL. (If there’s no red x email me at Runtshell@aol.com. I can delete the wrong link for you).
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- Make note in your blog if you’d prefer not to have constructive criticism.
- *NOTE-If your link is to an advertisement or any type of platform (be it religious or political) it will be deleted. And on that note:
TALK ABOUT CHANGING HORSES IN MID-STREAM- For those of you who have a problem with labeling your story with genre for whatever reason, fret no more! While there was a good reason for it, it appears the cons far outweigh the pros. I maintain that it’s a good idea to know your genre for professional purposes. But for Friday Fictioneers purposes and my own precarious sanity we’ll let it go. PLEASE exercise discretion when commenting on someone’s story and blog. Keep the comments respectful and kind. This is not the place to promote political or religious views. If you have a severe or hostile difference of opinion with someone please take it to email or other method of private messaging.
- Thank you for your patience and support as I learn to steer the bus.
- ***My story will follow the photo prompt for those who would rather write before reading other stories. Like everyone else, I value your comments and critiques. 😉 ***
HAPPY BIRTHDAY
Atiya Townes -January 3
David Stewart -January 4
Erin Leary-January 10
(Let me know if you have a birthday this month.)
This week’s photo prompt from Lora Mitchell seems to be just the right one to launch the new year.
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Genre: Historical Fiction
During China’s Song Dynasty (970 – 1260), seen as property, a woman’s sole purpose was to please her husband. Officially sanctioned, foot-binding became the essence of feminine beauty. The smaller a woman’s foot, the better her chances of marrying well. The practice continued into the 20th century until China came under Communist rule. To read more on the subject, click here.
GOLDEN LOTUS
With highly prized feet that fit a man’s palm, bones bound and crushed in childhood, Zhen Xi’s youthful beauty caught wizened warlord Han Donhai’s eye.
Every night she endured the beatings that followed his inadequacy. She feared he’d too soon discover her secret and she’d suffer the same fate as three past wives who died under his sword for failure to conceive.
Seven months after the wedding, fireworks spangled the sky in celebration of Donhai’s nine pound heir.
Hours later his blade flashed above her.
“You faithless whore!”
She smiled. Her child would live while her unbound spirit ran free.
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Dear Rochelle,
You have crafted an uplifting tale of the spirit’s triumph in a world where the deck is hopelessly stacked against your protagonist. Sometimes dying well is the best revenge. Her smile perfectly punctuates her life and your fine story.
Aloha,
Doug
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Dear Doug,
Your kind commentary and depth of understanding has my smile punctuating my morning. Thank you,
Shalom-Aloha,
Rochelle
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I think people might get confused with the fireworks picture. I almost did.
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Hi Rich,
You have me a little confused. Do you mean confusion of the Chinese girl picture in my FB post or confusion between the fireworks picture and my story?
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yeah, with the chinese picture, i wasn’t sure which was really the prompt because yours incorporates both. so we’re doing the fireworks, right?
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Sorry about that. That’s the picture that popped up when I posted and I didn’t bother to change it. But you can always tell by checking out the Friday Fictioneers page. Whatever the banner is that week will be the prompt. And Yes, the fireworks picture is the prompt.
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great. thanks.
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That’s a great and very different take on the picture. I like the final line, about her “unbound spirit”. It brings it all together. I haven’t even started thinking about what I’ll write for it yet. Friday is my birthday, so I’ll have to make it something special. 🙂
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Dear David,
First of all happy birthday. Glad you’re sharing it with us. Thank you for your kind comments. Looking forward to your story.
shalom,
Rochelle
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Happy Birthday, David.
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I would be in big trouble in any days when small feet were the rage. (I know they were artificially small, but still.)
You used the bound and unbound contrast to good effect and I like that you let us figure out the reason for the lack of children. Then you turned that on its head by having her have a child, then demonstrated her love for that child by your ending. I guess his love of having an heir, whether his or not, would overcome the fact that it wasn’t his child but I did wonder if he might kill the child as well.
Trying to decide how soon to post my story, since I already posted this morning. The difficult decisions…
janet
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Yes, agree with the comment above, hope the child will be safe after all. What a strange custom that was, the binding of each foot, and or once not religious either – referring to mutilation of babies/children,in particular females. The revenge is powerful.
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A fine and unique take on the prompt, with a bold statement. Thanks for the information, which was very fascinating and revealing. A blessed New Year to you, Rochelle. 🙂
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I knew about the way the women were treated back then. What surprises me is the fact that he allowed her to come to term. There wasn’t much mercy back in those days and if you were found to be disloyal AND producing and illegitimate heir, I’d think you’d be banished on pain of death – or worse.
This is a fascinating story, as they were a very fascinating people. Their view on the foot size just baffles me…you’d think you’d want your wife to be able to stand up or do things that could please you (as a man), right? Hm. Anyways, I enjoyed this tale of freedom in unexpected places Rochelle.
Happy 2013!
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Dear Tony, It is after all fiction. My thoughts are that he took the baby from her (as I’ve read in other historical accounts…mostly fiction also) where he might have given the child to another wife because he’s desperate for an heir and it’s pretty obvious he’s never going to produce one.
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My laughter over the lack of a twelve step recovery program faded as I read your beautiful tale. “With highly prized feet that fit in a man’s palm, bones bound and crushed in childhood…” set a somber tone for this full and emotional piece. Very well done, Rochelle.
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Dear Rochelle – A great story from a very brutal time, but I fear the baby would have met the same fate as Zhen Xi.
Dee
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Dear Dee,
I guess it depends on how desperate Donhai is for an heir.
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Very good historical fiction story, Rochelle. And a sad history with it as is with the Geisha girls, etc.
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Excellent story, and skillfully crafted Rochelle. It’s so easy to get ‘tell-ish’ but with careful construction you managed to get the essence of the story across – the premature/paternity issue. It’s a barbaric custom, and having reached the stage where my feet perpetually hurt, I can only empathise with these poor women. At least I had the ‘joy’ of staggering around in winkle-pickered stilettos to account for my discomfort. 😉
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Thank you, Sandra. Beside reading the article (above link) I watched a couple of You Tube videos. Indeed the custom went beyond barbaric.
Your “winkle-pickered” comment has me rolling. I’m a flat-shoes person myself.
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Rochelle,
I love the last line as well. Her defiance is something I admire and she does it with a smile. My kind of lady. Well done.
Tom
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Just realized I wasn’t following the rules…Hey what else is new? There Now is a warning on my post. Although I do not curse in my post there is a good chance I will in my comments. I try to be respectful of cursing on other writers blogs but to be fair I push the limit when I think the blogger can handle a profanity or two. But on my page please feel free to vent, curse and bring up touchy subjects..I just love that kinda….stuff. That was the word I was looking for! Stuff….sigh.
Tom
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Oh No!!!
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It’s true I wasn’t playing by the rules…and I would like to add one if I may…It’s 100 words not 99 or 103 or 132….and a warning should be placed on all stories over or under 100 words….just venting and I didn’t even curse.
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Dear Tom,
I may have to make you stand in a corner. Please know there’s a good reason for the genre rule which I’d be happy to discuss with you in a less public chat.
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Riders who misbehave have to sit in the front seat, directly behind the driver. The back row is reserved for perpetual underacheivers who are too busy picking at other rider to notice the bus has left without them.
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I guess that would be Tom and me behind the driver. But don’t worry Russ… we’ll let you let you know when he starts the engine.
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I’m an excellent driver! LOL…..ahhh Ted you just made me spit my hummus out!
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I’m going now, to count the words in your story, Tom. I’ll give you 5 minutes to make any adjustments.
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Count every single word in every Friday Fictioneer story Ted! Except one…but I could change that if I tried. The Boss made me do it!
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This is a very unique and thoughtful story Rochelle. A story of triumph and vindication – sad yet hopeful. It was a barbaric custom and it is unfortunate how women have been treated across cultures and countries and centuries.
I can’t praise your story enough. It’s a masterpiece – intricate, complex and yet so simply narrated.
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This is a powerful story, Rochelle. I read it a few times through to absorb and get the full impact. I agree with David, the last part about her unbound spirit tied it all together well. Very provocative, and inspiring for me, personally. You started the year off with a bang.
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Very original take on the prompt… I think I have heard of the foot binding custom… Some many strange things in our world…Happy New Year
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Let me be the first to say what a great story you wrote this week, Rochelle. Oh Wait… I’m not the first? Oh yes, there’s all those early birds… Let me agree with them and all who follow… A beautiful piece again…. You do set the bar high. Wonderful photo by Lora… tell her we’ve missed her.
My fans have been asking that I not wait till Friday to add my story to the Fictioneers. So I will be joining the Wednesday Fictioneers this week. And, so they do not have to wait to click the Frog… here it is… http://tedstrutz.com/2013/01/02/friday-fictioneers-horror-bright-lights/
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Dear Ted,
Maybe we should change the name to weekly Fictioneers? On the flip side of that I have people still posting Tuesday and sometimes after that. The frog goes live at the same time as the page.
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a great story, i love that you transported us all to a different place and time.. and such a mysterious era with strange customs
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Another compelling story! Thanks, Rochelle.
Fortunately I have dainty beautiful little feet that required no binding …
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Wonderful story – very Madame Butterfly-ish! I’ve been away for a while, but I’m trying to get back into the Friday routine. My story is written and will go live on Friday. Thanks for keeping up with this and finding great pictures for inspiration.
http://kbnelson.wordpress.com
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Thank you Karen and welcome back. I’m looking forward to reading the story that will be attached to your link.
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Can’t say I share their foot fetish. Long slender feet with pretty painted nails are more to my liking.
Once again, I must commend you for an outstanding story. Like Janet stated, excellent use of bound & unbound to bring the tale full circle.
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Dear Russell,
Thank you for your kind comment.
BTW, what color do you usually use to paint your toenails?
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my fav line is the last about the mother’s unbound spirit. 🙂
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Hi Rochelle,
That gazebo does look like a shrine, and fireworks were invented by the Chinese, but, honestly, have you been watching a lot of samurai movies? I thought you found a different and interesting take on the photo. Maybe the child will exact revenge. Ron
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Dear Ron,
I write whatever the voices tell me. The first thing that popped into my head was the Chinese connection with fireworks. I’ve a fascination with Asian cultures and the subject of foot-binding lodged itself in my head. From there the story bloomed.
Um…Saurai were Japanese.
Thanks for your comments. Loved your story this week.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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hello Rochelle, that was an awesome story. I’ve read some on the binding of the feet and thought it was barbaric. You did a great job with it.
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this was spectacular. So much emotion packed into your 100 words. Wow.
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Hi Rochelle. Loved the story you wrote and read about this custom for the first time. Such a barbaric custom. But you gave it a pretty positive feel.
This is my first time trying to write a story for your group. I ended up with 2 different stories. 🙂
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A very succinct and poignant glimpse into that aspect of history. I agree–the unbound spirit running free is a magnificent image.
Here’s mine: http://unexpectedpaths.com/indulgences/
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A lot packed into this. Really liked it. Even the painful ending – uplifting but sad
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well done, as always!
Mine is http://oldentimes.wordpress.com/2013/01/04/friday-fictioneers-its-a-new-year/
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Great prompt Rochelle. Here’s my link. Talk to you soon.
http://rendezvouswithrenee.com/2013/01/04/friday-fictioneers-who-knew/
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Dear Rochelle, a very powerful story. Though footbinding may not still happen, there are still plenty of other tortures perpetrated across the world, so this raises our awareness as well as being really well written. (PS I don’t think her feet helped her marry ‘well’ on this occasion, though it may have seemed so.)
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On the contrary, Anne. The articles I’ve read, including the one in the link in my intro, the Chinese set great store by those teeny feet. The smaller her feet, the better chances she had for a wealthy husband. That’s too bizarre for me to make up.
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http://lingeringvisions.wordpress.com/2013/01/04/friday-fictioneers-tonight-is-going-to-be-epic/
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A powerful and well-written story, Rochelle. Like others, I fear for the child, but the mother’s faith gives me hope, and her own fate is ultimately uplifting as well as tragic.
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the beauty of historical fiction is you learn something new in an enriched sort of way…like having a full body flavored coffee instead of the bland mild cup. hopefully the foot binding custom is buried deep below in some ancient Chinese temple.
thanks. 🙂
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So sad, and her only possible release from bondage. Having desirable “golden lotuses” didn’t benefit her at all, did it? It was such a cruel custom…it’s shocking to realize that millions of women had to live with bound feet for centuries. I’ll join everyone else in hoping that he was so eager for an heir that he raised her baby as his own child.
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By the way Rochelle – I want to say this as gently as I can, but I am a little worried about the request for genre labeling, mostly because I do know several people personally who won’t even look at fiction in some genres (I don’t mean categories like erotica; I mean they won’t read fantasy, or won’t read historical fiction, or whatever.) I hope we don’t turn out to have problems of this kind within the Fictioneers group – I suppose we’ll have to see what develops.
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Dear Sharon,
At this stage there’s no need to be gentle. It seemed like a good idea at the time but turns out to not be such a good idea. Soooooo….between you, me and anyone else reading this note, forget the whole genre thing.
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Thanks, Rochelle.
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Hi Sharon,
I’ve gone so far as to go ahead and change the above message. See what you think. And thanks for weighing in on what’s become a touchy subject.
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There is nothing wrong with trying things. Sharon’s concerns were the same as mine. I knew the Genre Thing would go by the wayside, and that was the best reason.
Thank you fearless leader.
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Some things work and some things don’t. Even Ford produced an Edsel.
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seven months after. not a lucky number. but in a way, it was. well done.
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oh, in case you’re interested, i didn’t put anything about the genre because i didn’t want to give anything away about where the story was going. looking back, i should have done it anyway because i didn’t do very well this week. so just an FYI.
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Hi Rochelle,
this was a fine story, however stories like this make me a bit sad ( as the father of two daughters ) for the thought of women as little more than cattle. Still she fought as much as she could.
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Some horrible history behind us. Thanks for the comments, Bill.
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Hi again! Been a little (ok, a lot) remiss in posting recently, so I thought I’d grab your prompt once again and see where it took me. Hope it doesn’t go -too- far off-stream. 😉
As for your story, wow. As an amateur mythologist (real word or my own creation? Does it matter?) I read a lot and a lot of obscure history and myths and legends, so was very aware of the foot-binding custom, and even have some of my own theories as to the why of it…but going from that to the political drama of the ancient and “inadequate” (that giggled me) Emperor and the woman (bound in three different respects: bound feet, bound in marriage, and bound as in determined) who gave her country an heir and her child an Empire, even at the cost of her own life, was inspired. In so few words you encompassed an entire era of history, two (even three, considering how much concern has been shown the newborn Emperor) fascinating and intense characters, and a reinstatement that no matter what we (women) may feel we’ve been through (and no, I’m not excusing anything), like everything else, there is always someone, somewhere, who has it worse. In other words, awesome story! *grins*
Btw, are you aware that the process of foot binding is not so ancient as all that? There are still elderly women alive in China today whose feet were bound as children!
Yours,
KC
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Dear KC,
I’m happy you liked my story and found it to ring true.
In my intro I site that foot-binding continued into the 20th century until it was abolished by the Communist regime. There’s also a link to a highly informative article in the intro.
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Wow! That story is (an understatement incoming . . .) awesome! I really don’t know what to say other than that. Great direction to take that picture. Just really brilliant. Wondering how much research you put into that. Mine (which I threw into the mix, finally) seems to be mostly just whims tossed onto a page lol… Not much thought into it, really. But that story, wow!
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Dear Robert,
You overwhelm me with praise. Thank you.
I enjoy research almost as much as I enjoy writing. For me it’s important for the stories to ring true. Then internet is a magnificent tool for finding obscure facts. Some stories don’t require me to do research…but most do in some way or another. The ones that make me dig are my favorites.
Admittedly, I’m obsessive and rarely spend less than two days on a flash fiction. Everyone has their methods and priorities.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A well-told story. I too was startled by the fact the baby was allowed to survive, but then it is a boy and a heir is needed. A nice twist on the prompt.
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A particularly nasty practice. One of a number of unsavoury female mutilations carried out around the globe. Nice complete story.
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The craziest part of that is that the women themselves saw it as a thing of beauty. Go figure.
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Hi Rochelle
Fabulous story again this week – I didn’t think historical fiction would work well in 100 words (due to having to set up a ‘period’ feel to it etc.) but you proved me wrong. Well done 🙂
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Amazing story.
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Hi Rochelle, your story is very moving, and, leaves us with much to think about, in so few words.
I love your FF opportunity. I forgot to look on Wednesday. I was inspired to write a story to the picture, just the same. Hope it’s ok I post it here for you to read?
Thank you, Shelly
A New Year’s Tale
Genre: Romance
Bath bubbles were everywhere, including my hair, and my wine. Heading for a refill, I saw the message light. Bubbles bursting, did he do it again? Click, the voice, my weak knees, telling… he did.
New Years’ Eve, like many nights this past year, I was alone.
The harbour lay gracious outside. The old year was fading into new all over the world, resolutions, kicking in. I ran to the fireworks. Taking the stairs, I tripped into the lobby, falling into his arms. By the water, sparkling with fire drops as far as we could see, we kissed. He had made resolutions, too.
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Dear Shelly,
Cute story and welcome to Friday Fictioneers. However, while you’r not hurting anything by posting your story here, you’re also not getting much viewing time from others in the group. If I were you, I’d go ahead and paste the prompt on your blog with your story. Then come back and post your link in the links tool. Click the blue froggy guy just to the side of the photo.
Granted it’s a little late in the week but not out of the question. Some of us go back and look at the list over and over to see if we’ve missed anyone. I’ll be posting the next prompt Wednesday morning.
shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle.
I will. I’m happy to have found you! Challenging myself to grow, as I slowly emerge.
And, shalom to you too,
Shelly
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