A word prompt to get your creativity flowing this weekend. How you use the prompt is up to you. Write a piece of flash fiction, a poem, a chapter for your novel…anything you like. Or take the challenge below – there are no prizes – it’s not a competition but rather a fun writing exercise. If you want to share what you come up with, please leave a link to it in Sammi’s comment section.
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The following is an updated flash fiction I posted in Friday Fictioneers a few years ago. It just seemed to fit the prompt. My title is part of the word count in this case. 😉
LOST IN TRANSLATION
A stunning contradiction of cropped black hair, bronzed skin and sea-foam blue eyes, Aggie McKewen’s face reflected her Inuit and Scottish parentage.
Every Saturday Keith, who worked at his uncle’s café in Seward, Alaska, served her grilled salmon in shy silence. He longed to speak to her but she was as deaf as a fencepost.
He enrolled in night classes, determined to learn to express his feelings in sign language.
After six weeks of diligent practice, he felt ready to ask her out and signed his invitation.
With a voiceless giggle she snatched his pen and order pad. There she wrote, “I’d love to but why did you call me a tampon?”
That’s so funny! He must have been devastated but I’m sure she saw the funny side of it!
Mine is called ‘Suis Moi’
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Dear Keith,
I think Aggie found great humor in it and accepted his invitation. 😀 That’s my story and I’m sticking to it. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle this is wonderfully funny. I can feel my face heating with embarrassment for him, but good on him for making the effort. As far as romantic gestures go, this is at the top of the list.
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Dear Carol,
I think Aggie more than appreciated his efforts. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Great post 🙂
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Thank you. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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As a citizen of the great state of Alaska I salute this jovial reference! Poor Keith. But, I’m betting he gets the date!!
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Dear Violet,
Alaska is a beautiful state. I’ve had the pleasure of visiting on two different occasions. The first time was in the month of July so I had a little difficulty getting used to the sun setting at 11:00 PM. 😉 As for Keith, I think you’re right. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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LOL! Lost in translation, eh? 🙂 LOL!!!
Great little piece! Hilarity ensued here … And heartwarming, too, in the way that efforts mean something, too … 🙂
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Na’ama Y’karah,
My thoughts are that Keith and Aggie will laugh about their first conversation for a long time to come. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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🙂 I bet they would!
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All those night classes went for naught but ended well 🙂
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Dear Rekha,
I think Keith just got his signs confused. 😉 From now on I think he’ll have Aggie to help him with his homework. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
I do believe this is the beginning of a beautiful romance!
Shalom and lotsa love,
Dale
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Dear Dale,
In my mind it is so it must be so. 😉 Thank you for reading and commenting. 😀
Shalom and lotsa hugs,
Rochelle
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A great romantic/comedic tale. If she was giggling, you know she had a great sense of humor and accepted it for what it was meant to be. Although I felt embarrassed for Keith, I have a feeling all turned out well for both of them. I’ll bet he got lots of free lessons in signing from that point on.
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Dear Jan,
Who wouldn’t giggle? At the same time, while Keith would be embarrassed, I think Aggie realized the effort he put into trying to communicate with her. I mean, he could have just written her a note. 😉 I think he might have earned himself a lifetime of lessons. Thanks, m’luv.
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A lovely story and think how much fun they’ll have laughing about it later. Living in countries where English is not the first language, or barely even spoken, I’ve made so many language blunders over the years that my family and I laugh about until today. =)
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Dear Brenda,
I can imagine. I know I didn’t use much of my very minimal Hebrew in Israel. I have a lot of Latino friends who are very gracious with my Spanish. Thank you re my story. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Ah! language barriers. Not knowing any is also a barrier. What a fun filled story. Looks like their romance has started on a very hilarious note. Loved this fun story immensely, dear ROCHELLE.
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Dear Neel,
I think Keith and Aggie will be laughing about this moment for years to come. No doubt she’s bring him up to snuff on his sign language. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Ha ha at least she understood that he meant well, and he must have even gotten extra credit for even all that effort too
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Dear Larry,
I’m sure Aggie recognized his good intentions. I think they’re going to laugh about it for years to come. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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All for love, lol!
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