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As some of you are aware, my story last week was based on fact. It’s been a busy summer, fraught with highs and lows. The story and picture are both reruns from 2014. A handful of you were part of Friday Fictioneers. Feel free to rerun your own story from that week.

Genre: Fiction
Word Count: 100
C’EST LA VIE
When I was a co-ed I married a professional baseball player.
After a year, a specialist told us we’d never conceive.
Jack refused to adopt. He couldn’t see himself raising “another man’s bastard.”
Within weeks he divorced me and married a fan.
Devastated, I left for France. In Apremont-sur-Allier I found healing in Ranier’s arms.
“All I have to offer is my farm and my love,” he said.
“I can’t give you children,” I said.
“All I want is your heart.”
Today we greeted our fourth son, the spitting image of his father.
Jack? No runs. No hits. No heirs.
A veritable parable, Rochelle. Jack got what was (alliteratively) coming to him
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Dear Neil,
It’s always fun to see such a rascal get his comeuppance, isn’t it? Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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No heirs and no graces either. Your narrator did well to reconstruct her future. And thanks for giving credit to the beautiful village of Apremont -sur-Allier, a lovely reminder of my previous life. 🙂
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Dear Sandra,
This remains one of my favorites that I’ve written for FF. I enjoyed a little vindication for my MC. 😉 Love the photo. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Selfish Jack got what he deserved.
So happy for Ranier & his ladylove. God rewards good people.
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Dear Anita,
Glad you enjoyed my story. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Not just a happy ending, but a happy life! Lovely! Thank you, Rochelle
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Dear Penny,
I’m sure her life is busy with four sons. 😉 Thank you for your sweet comment.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Serves Jack right for not wanting to raise ‘another man’s bastard’ – but such a lovely love story, too.
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Dear Gabi,
I agree. Jack had it coming. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Ah, love… and I love the pun at the end.
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Dear Trent,
I’m glad you caught the pun at the end. It was fun to write Jacks wrong. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It doesn’t always go that well but it’s nice to see she finally found Mr. Right
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Dear Larry,
No, things don’t always work out. But as a writer I could right at least one wrong. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Love your tale.
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Thank you, Di.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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🙂
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That last line is brilliant!
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Thank you, Nobbin. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Love conquers here. I’m sure she found much love and happiness on the farm. Better than a baseball stadium. Good story.
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Dear Jan,
Obviously Jack is a self-absorbed butthead. 😉 Thank you, m’luv.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Ha! What is that saying….of the sweet taste of just dessert! Well-scribed…
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Thank you for the sweet comment, Ain. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Great tale. Poor Jack. Glad she found true love.
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Dear Ahtling,
Jack had it coming. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Unlike Jack, she hit a bases-full homerun! Love this story (which is brand-new for me).
Shalom and lotsa love with no demands,
Dale
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Dear Dale,
Love the way you put that. Definitely a bases loaded homerun. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom and lotsa unconditional hugs,
Rochelle
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I figured a simple homerun wasn’t sufficient 😉
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Perfect irony.
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😀 Thanks Linda.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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We can only hope Jack read this back in ’14! Nice one Rochelle.
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Dear Keith,
Jack needed a wakeup call, didn’t he? Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, you told a lot of story in 100 words, I love this one ❤
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Dear Lisa,
I’m glad you enjoyed my story. After all these years, it remains one of my favorites that I’ve written. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, you’re very welcome.
Shalom,
Lisa
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Simple, effective and well written. But oh! the layers in this dessert – definitely makes it all the richer and savoury. And what a great ending line. Had me definitely chuckling for the almost perfect word-play sounds like “errors” …. absolutely delightful and charming story Rochelle.
Shalom 🙂
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Dear Wild Child,
I’m a punster and love a good play on words. 😉 I’m glad you do, too. Thank you for your kind words.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Looks like the specialist was not totally honest, or he was afraid to reveal the truth to Jack.
Lovely story with a happy ending.
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Dear James,
Having only 100 words limits what can be said. Perhaps the specialist did tell Jack he was the one with problem. Some people just can’t accept responsibility. Thank you for your kind words.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I checked the 2014 version. While I hope I would remember a story as smile producing as this, I couldn’t remember when I started friday fictioneering. I was using a different blog back then (now shuttered). This time I vow to remember your tale. Jack, no doubt, ended his career in the minors. Without minors.
Thanks for the smile this morning — a wonderful way to begin the day!
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Dear Lorraine,
Interesting that you’ve been this way before. Glad you’re back. Of course the first time around was seven years ago. We’ve all slept since then. 😉 Thank you for the return smiles.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Even me with the warped circadian rhythms has slept a night or two. Coming back to Friday Fictioneers after a while away, it was nice to see some of the same folks participating as well as “meet” new-to-me participants.
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I remembered the photo but had forgotten the vindictive pleasure of your story, Rochelle. Too many Jacks get away with blaming their wives for situations like this; I’m glad your narrator escaped that double misery.
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Dear Jen,
Vindictive pleasure indeed. There are too many Jacks who won’t accept the blame even if it’s spelled out in black and white. Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
She got the best of the deal: no regrets. Enjoyed the narrator’s “c’est la vie” tone too. And Jack? He got jack. Quite apropos.
Shalom,
Dora
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Dear Dora,
She did get the best of the deal, didn’t she? Hard to feel sorry for Jack. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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a happy ending for sure, but not for both. 🙂
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Dear Plaridel,
Jack earned his ending. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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All it took was love. Nasty Jack, serves him right.
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Dear Ali,
Justice is served. 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I remember this photo. It was so inspirational. I wrote many small devotionals from the inspiration entitled “Behind the Haywagon”. I meant to go through files to see if I could find the original post, alas and anon, it is not to be found at the moment. I loved the twist you put to the story.. Serves the jerk right. Several deep lessons in this write. Slugging away here, and hoping to meet my newest nephew in person next week! Little Grant is soo cute in his pictures. Shalom, Bear
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Dear Bear,
There’s nothing like a newborn to lift your spirits. Thank you for your kind comments re my story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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He was born last year during pandamn. I’m excited to meet in person.
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A lovely, life affirming story Rochelle. I think the irony of your ending, is perfect, just what Jack deserves !
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Dear Francine,
I’m so glad you agreed with my ending. We do like to see justice served, don’t we? 😉 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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That last paragraph is so good, very clever wording for this baseball fan to relate to! 😀
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Dear Sascha,
I’m particularly pleased with that last line. Glad you related. 😀 Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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The last line was just the perfect ending to this sweet story. Guess Jack was just that_ jack of all master of,,,
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Dear Neel,
Or he didn’t really know Jack…;) Thank you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Oh ho, seems like the one unable to produce was the superstar. Jackass.
Love this, Rochelle. Great story.
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